Mack's Progress Ch. 07

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We'd given up on the French Letters when we'd been in Alicante; Codi seemed to have a never ending supply of birth control pills hidden away somewhere. We'd both assured each other that we were clear of any sexual diseases, which turned out to be true. Codi said that she hadn't been as promiscuous as the other girls in the back packing party and I believed her. Often she claimed that she found their outrageous behaviour embarrassing most of the time.

"You were quick enough to jump into my bed," I pointed out to her one evening.

"You were different than the other guys," she replied.

"Oh, in what way?" I asked.

"Well, Craig was doing a lot of talking. And he said for a guy with the stud reputation that you have, you were avoiding women like the plague. I figured that he had you wrong and you were shy or something. Then you walked into that cabin and my heart nearly jumped into my throat, I just knew that you were the guy I was going to marry. So I threw caution to the wind; I figured that I had one night to get my hooks into you."

"Well, you hooked me, girl, there's no mistake about that."

By Christmas Codi and I were discussing where and when we were going to get married. Whether we should wed in Indiana or in the UK; eventually the decision was made to marry in the UK. Codi's extended family was much smaller than mine and she thought that they would nearly all be able to afford the airfare. Whereas I doubted many of my family could afford to fly to the US for the occasion.

By the middle of January Codi's father had sent us open tickets back to the States. Having talked to the guy several times on the phone, I gathered he was chaffing at the bit to meet his future son-in-law. Although I'm not sure that he was that enamoured about my profession in the UK. Codi and I were planning on trying for a pub tenancy somewhere in the UK after we were married.

Those months that Codi and were together I was in a different world to the one I'd lived in most of my life. When I had Lindsey I hadn't had a satisfying sex life. When I'd been at the Willows my sex life had been out of this world but I hadn't had anyone to really love. With Codi I had it all, the love of a beautiful woman, who also turned out to be as crazy about sex as Millie was.

Codi told me that she and her boyfriend had sex regularly, but she claimed she'd only learnt to really enjoy sex in all its connotations after we'd got together. From the odd comment she made her sex life with her ex sounded a little repressed to me. But then who was I to talk? I'd had a completely repressed sex life with Lindsey.

Late February and the end of the skiing season was in sight. Codi and I were trying to organise our flight to the States so that I could meet her family, when a letter came from Beverley asking me whether I was planning on returning to the Willows for the season. I hadn't got around to replying when my life turned to shit again.

End of chapter 07

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11 Comments
Ocker53Ocker534 months ago

This bloke needs to be castrated, no one this stupid should be allowed to have children, the world has enough stupid without him adding to it⭐️⭐️⭐️

xhristianjxhristianjover 1 year ago

Man this is great just for the comments they're Awesome! Mack's Progress Is such a misnomer this is literally Mack's Regression. I mean for fucks sake give someone a choice to make and offer them a rational option or an irrational option this Asshole will go irrational everytime.

ArdieffArdieffover 2 years ago

Wow, feeling real bad for Lindsey. Really unsympathetic main character.

Artie88Artie88about 4 years ago
IDIOCY abounds!

Lyndsey would be better moving on from this idiot.

Really a moron.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Still enjoying

the story and all it's twists and turns.Has Lynn met Codi's father in the USA and decided to marry him,and thus make Mack her future step son in law?

bruce22bruce22almost 16 years ago
Fascinating developments

The story seems to show a more mature Mack in each chapter and now things get interesting. I wonder if Lyn or Conway were outside his door on the night after the wedding party more likely Julia and her husband.

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I kind of wish that you had stopped a line earlier and left us with the impression that the next chapter would all about the wedding or possible bad interactions with Codi's Family.

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You sort of took the suspense out of future events.

sirsemegasirsemegaalmost 16 years ago
Getting tired of this

It was good when it started off, but enough about Lyn already. Him not confronting her for two years is BS. Either confront her and settle this or go off and have a life without her, but you are stringing the audience along too much. Now with the engagement scene and she can't run and talk to him? Even screaming through the damn locked door so he can hear her? The more you drag this out, the more I think that they don't deserve each other.

Now a new wrinkle. Me thinks that this story will mirror Bev and the Police officers story where they will wind up marrying others and life their life in regret. Resolve this already.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
You sly devil;

you've got us flustered, frustrated, and flummoxed trying to figure out what is going to happen next. Congrats! Keep it coming; great job. P.S. Is Lynn going to do something tragic?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
A little too contrived ...

1st, I am enjoying the story. You write well and make your characters believable and interesting. That said, the "engagement scene" was over the top. Linsey waits 2 years for him. Her friends finally set Mack straight. He witnesses "the scene". We know she isn't interested, but can understand Mack's surprise. Now comes the unbelievable part. After the same friends take her home ("just talk to him"), she embarks upon a long trip to the States.

To more than make up for it, you add a new romance. That is beleivable and well done. I am looking forward for more twists and turns! -Ttom

michassmichassalmost 16 years ago
Overall a decent read

But I'm starting to get the impression that it is the author who is blundering about as much as the protagonist. After a while the coincidences and contrivances about the Lynn story line are just getting silly and boring.

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