Marco! Polo!

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DJ's girlfriend, Cindy Knudsen is a primary character in 'Tutelage' in the First Time Category.

Have a swell day. And some of you, have a swollen day.

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AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

I read these stories all the time in my little world but this story took out into its world and I loved it. Thanks.

CpdtpCpdtpabout 1 month ago

The family gathering parts were really well written, those parts felt alive, something you rarely see on most stories, focused on laying the facts, rather than building atmosphere.

TailakaTailaka2 months ago

Another entertaining story in jimbob44s universe. It's just good luck that we're as entertained by the stories he writes for his entertainment.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Owen isn’t the sharpest knife in the drawer. He married a twice cheating gold digging whore.

DukeofPaducahDukeofPaducah4 months ago

I was thoroughly entertained by this tale. The interaction between John and his daughter, his family and friends and even his

ex-wife and her children showed a depth of connection and love. The description of the barbecue captured this vividly.

The molestation of Cecil by Andy when he applied the ‘Father Nelson’ cracked me up. Thank you for this.

newfordnewford4 months ago

And another excellent tale of suburban life 5 stars

Simon_MastersSimon_Masters4 months ago

What was the Marco polo thing about?

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Love this story. Crazy, but well told snd “interesting,” not the usual LW tropefest. Love how much John is a real adult, achieving the best revenge by moving forward, being happy, modeling adult behavior for all the children and adults, and ending up in the end with a young hottie because even her young teenager eyes can see who the best man in the neighborhood is. Great stuff. More please.

TheMTOneTheMTOne5 months ago

I love the dialogue as always!

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman5 months ago

Excellent, thank you

AllNigherAllNigher5 months ago

I somehow enjoy your stories and can't figure out why. The critic in me says that there's emotion lacking, it jumps around, hard to follow, character introduction isn't great, the speech is tough to follow....

But damnit I keep reading and enjoying them... Bizarre 😀

moultonknobmoultonknob5 months ago

Just another load of bollocks that's hard to follow as it seems to jump about from one thing to another for no reason.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Another great story by one of the best writers on Literotica. The world he has created is funny, sad, thought provoking, and above all, reads and feels very real. 5***** and thanks for the free gift of these great stories.

Chimo1961Chimo19617 months ago

The characters you develop are very realistic. They make these stories believable.

rbloch66rbloch669 months ago

A little hard to follow at times, but a good story.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Kinda predictable. Poor introduction to & too many characters. It was hard to keep track of who was who.

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