Marco! Polo!

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DJ's girlfriend, Cindy Knudsen is a primary character in 'Tutelage' in the First Time Category.

Have a swell day. And some of you, have a swollen day.

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CpdtpCpdtp3 days ago

The family gathering parts were really well written, those parts felt alive, something you rarely see on most stories, focused on laying the facts, rather than building atmosphere.

TailakaTailakaabout 1 month ago

Another entertaining story in jimbob44s universe. It's just good luck that we're as entertained by the stories he writes for his entertainment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Owen isn’t the sharpest knife in the drawer. He married a twice cheating gold digging whore.

DukeofPaducahDukeofPaducah3 months ago

I was thoroughly entertained by this tale. The interaction between John and his daughter, his family and friends and even his

ex-wife and her children showed a depth of connection and love. The description of the barbecue captured this vividly.

The molestation of Cecil by Andy when he applied the ‘Father Nelson’ cracked me up. Thank you for this.

newfordnewford3 months ago

And another excellent tale of suburban life 5 stars

Simon_MastersSimon_Masters3 months ago

What was the Marco polo thing about?

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Love this story. Crazy, but well told snd “interesting,” not the usual LW tropefest. Love how much John is a real adult, achieving the best revenge by moving forward, being happy, modeling adult behavior for all the children and adults, and ending up in the end with a young hottie because even her young teenager eyes can see who the best man in the neighborhood is. Great stuff. More please.

TheMTOneTheMTOne4 months ago

I love the dialogue as always!

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman4 months ago

Excellent, thank you

AllNigherAllNigher4 months ago

I somehow enjoy your stories and can't figure out why. The critic in me says that there's emotion lacking, it jumps around, hard to follow, character introduction isn't great, the speech is tough to follow....

But damnit I keep reading and enjoying them... Bizarre 😀

moultonknobmoultonknob4 months ago

Just another load of bollocks that's hard to follow as it seems to jump about from one thing to another for no reason.

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