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Click hereCarol moved out and quit working for us this year. She lives on a ranch about thirty miles outside Santa Barbara. Her man is the foreman on the ranch. I like him and I think he likes me. We don't share. She's going have a baby in a couple months. The baby won't look like me.
After the baby's born Donna and I are going to three different cities so I can learn to make BBQ in three different styles. Come by next year and have some ribs.
I encourage votes and comments; especially comments intended to assist me in improving as an author. Attacks on my morality, belief systems or sexual orientation won't work. I've had many years of that from a professionally hostile ex-wife. Thank you for reading.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoVery nice story, Scorpio, thanks for posting it. I was surprised he didn’t call one of his vice cop buddies and have Tina busted for hooking. But then if he did I guess he wouldn’t have gotten his hands on two-thirds of the money she made from hooking. I was also surprised that she actually gave up that money that easily.
Nevertheless, a great story, thanks again for it.
5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
EastCoaster15 months agoI liked the story, but to be honest, what guaranteed the 5th star was the statement at the end about you being attacked and harassed by "a professionally hostile ex-wife" !!
Very nicely done, and a fun read.
Thanks for writing.
Anonymous5 months agonobody died,nobody got half beaten to death . it was actually pretty civilized compared to some of the btb stories i've read . if the ex wife had that much money in the bank she was either busy ALL the time or had been at it a LONG time .
Kaeyoabout 1 year agoOver the top? Sure.
Fun? Definitely.
I believe a few people here appear to be of the opinion that LW stories can’t be fun, they can only be uber-serious. Well, they are wrong. There is a place for both styles. As Vandemonium says, “now lighten up”. Good story, Scorpio.
DeanofMeanover 1 year agoWell written a fun romp, a bit over the top in the coincidence department, but hey weird shit happens all the time. The mom and daughter thing is a bit ick for me personally, but a good read an interesting character could be the pivotal character in a series, if you wanted to. It might be tough to have his wife being the other woman in every story unless you pushed it to satire i guess humm that might actually be kinda funny...
oldtwitover 1 year agoThat’s a good old fashioned story of good over bad, nice character development
fredbrownalmost 2 years agoLike the story, the plot, and the pacing but lf it was me I'd have tried to hang on to Tina - she sounds like an interesting woman. maybe not the brown holing part! I don't get no thrills from rimming, salad tossing, or shit packing - even if it is a fav in the Literotica stories!
AngelRiderabout 2 years agoThis was contrived nonsense. I can only imagine you had him with two women out of some asinine belief that it added symmetry to your story. It didn't. It just made it unrealistic and asinine. The whole story was bizarre because the characters might as well be out of a shitty B movie. There were too many plot holes, unanswered questions and abject stupidity for this to be taken even remotely serious. To say it was horrible is an understatement.
