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Click hereMelody sat next to the examination table as the doctor got the saw ready. "Place your arms up here and keep the flat and steady." Melody did as she was told. The saw buzzed into action and ten minutes later both casts were off. The doctor did some final test and gave her the all clear but told her not to do any heavy lifting or strenuous movements with her wrist as they would be weak. As we were getting ready to leave he gave me an appointment card with the first 2 physiotherapy appointments on.
We made our way back to the car and when we got in Melody lifted her skirt up revealing her pussy and I could see it was already wet, she stroked it and said to it "Who is a good girl turning daddy and the doctor on?"
I looked at her and just smiled, she smiled back and pulled her skirt down. On the drive home she placed her hand over my crotch and just left it there. From this I could tell that we were going to be having more fun and adventures in the possibly near future.
The End of the Beginning....
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoThis story was a certain **** Four star until I read the bit about 10" dicks, then my laughter just made it seem ludicrous. So I gave you *** Three stars.
The pathetic preoccupation with huge dongs ruins credibility.
On the other hand, it is possible that the author measures his - from the top of his kneecap. . . . . . whatever . . .
Anonymousover 9 years agoI'm still a teenager and a virgin and That story made me so wet. Too bad your not my daddy.
wrc264about 11 years agoThis was a good first effort but like the others said really needed an editor tol clean it up and make it a more enjoyable read without all the errors. Continue it with him finally getting to fuck her and then find out who the girl was that she had the bi experience with (maybe her sister) and he can get her too.
nightshadowover 11 years agoThe technical spelling/grammar/sentence-structure issues aside, this story could have benefited greatly from having an editor who could polish it. It's a fairly good premise and decent story idea (I've seen a few variations on it before), but it comes across as being formulaic- like the author really, really wants to get to the racy bits faster than he wants to actually tell the story. There's a lot more character development that could've been done, too- the father and daughter both seem almost like cardboard cutouts rather than people. I'll keep a close out out for the next part. Between now and then, I hope you'll take this constructive criticism to heart- I make these points only so that you can improve your craft and tell an awesome story. Just don't forget the main bit of advice: get an editor!
Anonymousover 11 years agoThe story would have been an excellent read but the grammar/spelling errors made it more difficult to read. If her arms were broken she should not have had the ability to maneuver a sex toy to her pussy. Don't rely on a system spellchecker but have a person review it. Don't stop writing. Storyline earns a 5 star rating but the grammar errors brought it to a 3.
Maximguyover 11 years agoNeeds an editor, lots of simple mistakes in here. Also. How is the daughter using a dildo when her hands are busted? Her being helpless was the whole point!
LAROCover 11 years agoTHIS STORY IS NOT A BAD REWRITE , BUT ALL STORIES HAVE BEEN CHANGED. IN ONE WAY OR ANOTHER. MOM / SON , SON /MOM , DAD / DAUGHTER , DAUGHTER / DAD WE ALL GET HURT AND NEED HELP, BY SOMEONE IN THE FAMILY. IT'S A GOOD STORY. AND I'AM SURE IT WILL BE TOLD OVER AND OVER IN DIFFERENT PAIRINGS......LAROC OF AGES
Anonymousover 11 years agoQUITE GOOD
JUST GET LIE AND LAY RIGHT
LIE LAY LAIN LYING
LAY LAID LAID LAYING
