All Comments on 'Mom & Son Vacation Together'

Highly erotic. Especially because only thoughts were revealed without a word spoken during the most intimate contact. The conflicts between love, lust and the forbidden were well portrayed. The 'escape clause' you created by not having the act openly acknowledged added a most credible sense of realism.

That was great !!! Plz do more.

This is one of the better i have ever read! more please:)

Awesome story! I loved it... makes me want more!

great!

exquisite, please include pt.2

Told with wonderful understanding and sympathy. Couldn't stop reading it!

PLEASE write another story.

The erotic way you dealt with the story was incredible. Your gift with words are as those of an artist with a paint brush. PLEASE WRITE MORE! You are the type of writer that needs to be here. THANK YOU!

MMMMMMMM What a story. Can see it clearly in my mind. MORE PLEASE!

Tonny

Beautiful story

This story is so erotic and so tender and yet so naughty as well. I loved it and can't wait to read your other stories.

WRITE MORE!!!!

Your story was simply amazing. The soft beginning and "secretive" nature are incredibly erotic. I loved picturing you with your breasts forbiddenly exposed to your son's eyes and acting like nothing was happening.

Please continue this story as the description of true mother and son love is wildly perfect.

The nice slow buildup was exciting. Not your usual "Mon caught me masturbating and helped" story. Very good writing. I was excited by your story. Please write another. Sequel would be nice and I am sure we will enjoy anything you write. Thanks for writing the story. Would you like to come to my hotel room sometime? :-)

i like it very much. It is true in the world

Loved your story, please write more, and sure wish you were my mom!

I think this is a really terrific story: nicely paced, sensitive, realistic, original - and god, SO erotic. Nicely done!

Yeah +1 for the pregnacy idea. Would have made an nice ending to this part though.

this text was wonderful. i truly enjoyed each sentence. please submit a follow up to this great work. bravo!

Great story, perhaps in the next chapter (and I hope there will be many more) you might realize that your son has made you pregnant. He did cum inside of you with no protection...and that is the ultimate taboo...getting knocked up by your own son! I have dreams about that happening with my own mother.

this happened to me to when i was 20 years old taking my mom on vaction, we had twin beds in a hotel and in the middle of the nite she climbed in my bed and starting playing with me which lead to oral and straight sex , now we have sex every chance we get

would like to read more. maybe not necessarily part two but something original

I love this and I rarely like incest -- very unusual and I can honestly say this is one of VERY few stories I've ever been totally convinced was actually written by a female.

it does not lay in how big a vagina or a penis is, or how many orgasms or how many penises a woman is "forced" to take into her body at one time

eroticism lies in the fact that it is a forbidden kind of "love" or "romance"; it has to do with the thoughts, feelings, and emotions behind it --- ie., the conflicting thoughts, emotions, and feelings

e.g., saying you have sex with your son 5 times a day, every position, and then you do it with your other two sons, etc., etc. there won't be much eroticism in it; it's just porno sex with family members

so, what makes something like this highly erotic is that it is precious, fleeting, conflicting ---- so,,, continue to write about those terrifying thoughts, those romantic thoughts about something so forbidden

so,,, don't stray into how big the son penise is; how you have orgies with his friends and how they all think you're just a "hot" babe; that will kill the story immediately, insofar as the quality as well as eroticism go

great story ,like the others I to am looking to reading more stories from you,

Excellent first story, Jane, I hope you'll favor us with further chapters and have these two explore their forbidden passion.

Excellent first story, Jane, I hope you'll favor us with further chapters and have these two explore their forbidden passion.

Enjoyed it very much. Thank you ,,,,and part 2?

I really liked this story, the pace/buildup was very well done. This story begs for a sequel. I'd love to see a part 2 where the mother and son's need for it to happen again overwhelmes them and they end up openly giving in to what they really want.

awesome... eagerly waiting for ur next submission...

Much better than the usual mother-son drivel. Good details and moms feelings/observations were believable. You are a genius!