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Soon she got back to normal and then she took her thong away from my mouth.
"Clean mommy's cunt baby! Lick me well and deep. Taste mommy!"
I did everything as she ordered. My mother then told me to go and sit on the bathtub and watch her lick my cum from the floor. She fell on all four and did it very thoroughly. She kept her ass up all the time and her legs spread so that I could have a full view of her glory, while she was licking and slurping my cum. After she was over, the floor was shining, her cunt was wet and my cock again hard. She turned to look at me and started to walk on her hands and knees, like a bitch, towards the bathtub.
"Have I ever told you how much I love to suck cock son?" she asked me, in a lusty way.
- COMMENTS
oldpantythiefabout 4 years agoThe fact of English not being the authors native language was taken into account, it still was a good story, just needed some help. There were many opportunities missed that could have made the story so much better for the readers, like when he was first taking pictures of his mother, how did he get her naked, what was she wearing , how did she pose and so on. That part of the story was just glossed over, readers want to know the details. I think the son was not all that confident either or he would have fucked his mother numerous times when she gave him the opportunity, instead of going ahead and jacking off. The biggest turn off for me was when she licked his cum off the bathroom floor. I'm sure some people are into that but this didn't seem to follow the storyline.
It was kind of amusing reading through the slightly off use of English, but still worth reading.
pepepilotalmost 6 years agoIt constantly appears to me that no one takes the time to read any notes before they get into the story. English is NOT his native language. Given that fact, it was a great story. Yes it needed help in the English department, but I thoroughly enjoyed the story and how it was written. Get off your high horse people. Not everyone is an English snob!!
Sapper257over 6 years agoWell you sure get the gist of what to write about. Had me hard so you got it right. A good angle to write from.
Carry on writing. Love most incest stories of Mothers, Grandmothers, Aunts and Great Aunts with young lads.
A good start, keep writing.
REgards
Anonymousover 6 years agoI'd like to say that this sucks, but am worried you'd think it was a compliment.
OzBushrangerover 6 years agoI enjoyed the story, which had its desired effect but it was a hard read. Please put your work through a contextual and spelling checker and arrange for someone to proof read and edit your work before pressing the 'Publish' button. You obviously have some creative skill but you need help with the spelling and grammar.
Ignore the comments of the gutless, 'Anonymous' trolls and listen to the constructive critiques of those who want to encourage you to achieve greater heights with your writing.
