All Comments on 'My Husband Sucks'

ok so the story fucking sucked lets face it! But whats with all the negative shit about Bostonfictionwriter? He is funny as hell and very fucking hot naked!

Sorry Sarah I would love to be your husband and suck you little red bush

But this gay story was a turn off

Nice satire of this category. I liked it!

You write both, no problem, but for a stright male, this is bad, Yikes!

I am not into gay stuff period.. you are so beautiful to me and I jack off alot to your stories... but I wont touch another man at all... I woulb be happy just jacking off with you watching me... that would be like heaven to me... but another man... NO WAY... sorry...

crap.

What a total piece of crap. Plus it's in the wrong section, this should clearly be "Gay Male" or whatever that section is called.

Uh, how are people supposed to know the like it before they read it? The only -- <b><i>ONLY</b></i> -- way your statement makes any sense is if you are stating that these stories are all alike and there is no talent, no intelligence, no worth at all in them.

Write a story about a serial killer named Sarahhh who offs wannabe authors. She euthanizes (murder is such a harsh word for a public service) BOSTONFICTIONWRITER and Scouries and then kills herself, making the world of erotic literature a much better place.

He wouldn't fuck her for fear of rotten crotch but most of all because she hated men - well except to humiliate.<P>

Gee sarahhhhaha your pain is showing - did a real man kick you out?

You personify talent wasted in your effort to coyly sicken real men. The wimps love you for your male humiliation insistence.<P>

Hard to win anything when your intention is to piss off more than 95% of the readers - so why bother.

Why are all of the negative comments left by anonymous assholes??? If you don't like it, don't read it!!!!

I'm always amazed by the stories that you write, and this is another one that truly stands out! Keep up the great work!

Bill

I would love to be your husband.

I would love to be your husband.

While I liked the story, and particularly the end, I did not enjoy it quite as much as many of your others. This was just because it really wasn't part of my tastes, so I wouldn't take that negatively at all though.

Hi honey… living on South Beach I know just how you feel about Charles. Before I met jim and became a film actress I was hit on all the time by guys like Charlie. Older guys that had money but wanted to have a young, beautiful chick on their arms to draw the big cocked, straight boys. So my advice is to give the guy up...It’s just not worth it sweetie – you should cum down here to Miami – we’d put you up - you could write screenplays for our films… hey, act in them too if you like. Love your writing… hope you win the contest…gabby

Reminded me of a (married) MILF I was doing in college when her husband caught us fucking. He was a State Trooper - I was waiting to get pumped full of lead.

Instead he pulled out his dick and started to jerk off while watching us.

It was a different, turned me on in a strange way having her husband watch us, and I swear I pounded his wife's pussy through the mattress.

Well... being a primed 20 year old and still hard after cumming in her, I felt in total control after I fucked the shit out of his wife while he watched. I told him to strip and get his ass into bed with us. He didn't cum yet so his dick was still hard. I shoved him on his back and straddled his face shoving my cock in his mouth and told my MILF to mount him and finger my asshole.

OMG, I felt like I shot a testicle or two out when I came - and the term buddysuck took on a whole new meaning. His wife was obviously hotter than ever - she squirted more on him while fingering my ass and fucking her husband.

but it's not. Ken

Yup, another piece of crap by Sarahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

My favorite Sarah scores again in more ways than one. Glad you chose my name this time. Cheers, cb

Seriously, those of us who are into the "Loving Wives" thing are not gay and we don't like that crap in the stories we read. Why not just leave it in the section that fits it and will be there for those who are looking for that stuff.

**The preoccupied young women ignored the peanut gallery** And that is just what you should do beautiful maiden. Ignore the critics – they are simply jealous of your wonderful talents. Already the mistress of INCEST and HUMOR, you’ve now trumped everyone who attempts LW stories….You ask, *** Do dogs bark, Charles?***. Well sarahhh you make me bark!!!....Best of luck in the contest. And maybe in future you’ll write in even stranger categories…like Romance…or Non-Human…or Mind Control…or… of fuck, the possibilities are endless....All your friends on South Beach celebrate you young lady!

Oh, my, revealed I am. Actually, I don't understand the previous posting, attacking me. Hmm...could be someone else. Anyway, yessss...oh, to be married to sweet Sarahh! Couldn't afford her, though. Go XOM, TLT (oops!) What about "Gunther" and "Tyrone," those studs you made me get exact-replica-Silicone-Dildos of their cocks? Yesss..I'll bend over. Try to keep the $$$ spending below 6 figures! 8^)

Finally some subtle humor and sex too. Great work, keep it up. Julee

Well, I would not put up with any of your shit, that is for sure. The

only spaoling you would get is the three times a day fucking you would be

getting. You would be bound most of the time and whipped regularily whether

you needed it or not. Discipline wopuld be fair but harsher than you are

accustomed to but then - you would get used to it. Either that or out you

go on your ass with only the skimpy clothes on your back. You would not be

mistreated but you would be treated like the slut you are. You would also

find that after a while you would start enjoying what is happening to you -

either that or you would not be getting any sex at all. Jorell1455

Sorry to burst your dreams but married to me would not be a bed or roses

except for the thorns as I would not put up with your cheating ways.

Baby, loved the story! Would love to be your husband to take care of your needs, and you would take care of mine too! Servicing you, your men, keep writing Sarahhh!

If it isn't it shouold be!

but the comments are a riot. Seriously, though, would have been better in humor.

It is not my style but in that kind of story it ia ahot one

Francis

The life of my dreams.

although the husband in the story is a totally accurate representation of BOSTONFICTIONWRITER.

Nice entry in the Nude Day contest. But, isn't every day nude day for you? Good dialog and story plot. Typically sarahhh in its lust for expensive cloths. I sometime wonder how much of that is the Sarah character and how much is Sarah the author of RATTRAP. Good luck in the contest.

Nice story line. You marrying an older man who likes to suck adds an Interesting twist to the "tail." Not as sexually intense as some of your other stories, but better written than most on L.

Fewer trolls that way.

You're so fucking senile you keep repeating yourself. I'm just amazed you don't have ED (Erectile Dysfunction). I got tired of pimping for you so I got married. What do I need you for, anyway? Besides the sex, I mean. When I kill off Charles I'll be rich and set for life. Stay tuned for my next story entitled "My Husband Took a Dirt Nap."

A slut writing about her gay/wimp husband. If you hate men so much why write about married life. No man could live with such a slut.

a self biography that suits you. A money hungry slutty ass whore. Great.

DAMN IT TO HELL SARAH!! IF YOU'VE GOTTEN MARRIED WITHOUT MY PERMISSION, YOU WILL NOT RECEIVE THE HEFTY INHERITANCE I'VE GOT SET UP FOR YOU! WHEN YOU GET HOME LATER TODAY, I'M PULLING THE CAR KEYS TO YOUR PT CRUISER CONVERTIBLE. A JAG XKR!!! HA HA!!

YOU MARRIED A COCKSUCKING HUSBAND, HUH? SO, WANTED TWO COCK SUCKERS IN ONE HOUSE? WHY NOT YOUR LITTLE ASIAN FRIEND, LIN? OH THAT'S RIGHT, LIN STAYS HERE WITH ME. WELL, GUESS WHO'S GETTING A NEW CAR FOR GOOD GRADES IN COLLEGE? NOT YOU, THAT'S FOR SURE!

NOW GET YOUR SCRAWNY ASS HOME RIGHT NOW!!

DADDY

DAMN IT TO HELL SARAH!! IF YOU'VE GOTTEN MARRIED WITHOUT MY PERMISSION, YOU WILL NOT RECEIVE THE HEFTY INHERITANCE I'VE GOT SET UP FOR YOU! WHEN YOU GET HOME LATER TODAY, I'M PULLING THE CAR KEYS TO YOUR PT CRUISER CONVERTIBLE. A JAG XKR!!! HA HA!!

YOU MARRIED A COCKSUCKING HUSBAND, HUH? SO, WANTED TWO COCK SUCKERS IN ONE HOUSE? WHY NOT YOUR LITTLE ASIAN FRIEND, LIN? OH THAT'S RIGHT, LIN STAYS HERE WITH ME. WELL, GUESS WHO'S GETTING A NEW CAR FOR GOOD GRADES IN COLLEGE? NOT YOU, THAT'S FOR SURE!

NOW GET YOUR SCRAWNY ASS HOME RIGHT NOW!!

DADDY

Good one, sarahhh. Of course, your REAL husband treats you like the stupid slut you are and gives you NO money -right???

Micro-soft LMAO, great image.

The dialogue, especially in the beginning was wonderful, especially Charles's character. I could nearly envision him.

A very fun story.

Only, I would think that this was more of a gay story than a loving wife story. Boy, if she was my wife, I wouldn't think she loved me at all. Calling her a loving wife is oxymoronic.

Good luck in the contest.

a cuckold, wimp story that is got the reasons right. the wife is just being used by the closeted husband to have some of taste of cocks. of course, coming out would have been cheaper and probably more pleasurable.