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Click here"Let her go!" someone yelled. I actually looked towards the door thinking it was Mrs. Holt yelling at us like when we were kids but it wasn't, this time it was a definite male voice. Everyone had turned behind them to Joel who was still sitting, his hand still holding his fork.
"Let Beth go." He said slower and calmer. Blue eyes so cold I nearly flinched. Eddie started to protest,
"I don't wan' her to-." Joel stood and Eddie dropped her like a hot potato. She hit the ground with a grunt and scrambled up the stoop into the house. Dave followed her with a little wave at me, I waved back not to be rude, and apparently it was the wrong thing to do because I felt hot eyes on my neck. Joel was staring a hole through me.
"Your unbelievable." He said, then turned abruptly and walked out of the enclosure to the wheat field beyond. I sighed and put a hand behind me to steady myself, there was a piece of plate there and it cut into my palm with a sharp painful sting. Hot blood poured out and I felt nauseous. I was squeamish don't you know? Great. Just fucking great. This was even worse then I imagined. What's next?
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
skruff101over 3 years agoAll the comments asking for more, why? This author hasn’t written anything for fifteen years, this is dead in the water.
Here’s a tip when you come across a new story from an author you’ve not read before, especially if it’s multi part. Check when it was written, is the author still writing, if it’s old like this is go straight to the last chapter scroll to the end, if it says ‘to be continued’ you haven’t waisted god knows how long getting into the story.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI don't see it as a romance story yet. Don't get me wrong, I've liked reading it so far, but it doesn't fit in that category. Get to it soon, but please don't be one of those writers who goes from "hi" to them banging away and confessing their undying love in a matter of a couple paragraphs.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoDoes anybody on this site Finnish.
It's a great start but please remove this series.
I hate reading unfinished series.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoGreat story, but alas, never finished.
I hate getting hooked and then....nothing.
To good a writer to have stopped :(
Anonymousalmost 15 years agois there gonna be another chapter? Very interesting story by the way..
mtmissyalmost 16 years agobut since you haven't written anything in 2 years your just taking up space. I really wanted to read the rest of the story. If you do decide to, let me know and I'll gladly come back!
Anonymousabout 16 years agoI like this story alot so far but you will probably never finish is it's going on 2 years since you last added a chapter it would be nice if you came back and finished it though would like to know how it ends..
peggytwittyalmost 18 years agoI hope we commenters have not stopped you from finishing your great plot line and story. You seem to have a great story line and mixture of characters to draw up and entice all of us.
Wish you well and hope you will return with more of your wonderful story.
Believe it or not you are appreciated
PT
