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I remembered telling myself that very thing about dreams not too long ago, but that was before I took the advice of one and began checking along the Shoreline.
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Foxterot7a10 months agoIf the author can keep up the quality of his/her effort this story represents, I hope he/she tries for a novel.
ReiDeBastosabout 9 years agoI'm just now reading this story, and there seems to be something missing between the end of Chapter 06 (Page 4) and the beginning of Chapter 07. 07 starts out in a cellar, with eight men halfway across it, digging towards our hero, whereas there was NO MENTION of the cellar, nor of said digging men, in Chapter 06.
Whahoppen?
-Rei
Anonymousabout 10 years agoWhen you threw Roxie in the mix I thought this had turned into another formulaic "mom's a happy slut and loves to share her son" incest story. But I am cautiously optimistic that this story has developed beyond that. Very interesting.
Franxmiffover 11 years agoI echo Clark3001's sentiments, this has started out well and gotten better, please don't let it slide... as so many have done in the recent past.
clark3001about 12 years agoThis is getting very very interesting and the incest factor is not the one making it so. Tim Burton would be proud of you.
chimpeeover 12 years agoNow a bit of the dark side whats happened to the Pastor and is she Sheila or is Sheila going to come into this super spicy stoty
L.A. Wickerover 12 years agoYou should have left the other woman out of it and left the kid and mom on their own!
chunksover 12 years agoTalking to yourself isn't so bad. Arguing with yourself is a problem. Losing arguments with yourself is a serious problem.
Blaggardover 12 years ago..........in this Family.
An interesting story with its erotic elements but a depth of content rarely attained.
Schizophrenia is an interesting and highly complex subject, far more complex than many understand or can comprehend.Personal experience with someone dear to me showed me my own limits of both.
I look forward to more...........well done so far!
Anonymousover 12 years agoThe old stories and words no longer fit so we built new ones like jedi and sith.
He has been talking to another self for awhile now without questioning it. Talking to yourself is one thing, having back and forth conversations is another all together. Clearly the bloodline here is a wee bit wonky and I would not be suprised to find out the occurrences of incest and inbreeding go way back in this family coupled with the darkness. Funny too how he looks like his grandfather who one of the sisters, (are we sure which one?), seduced.
