- Loving Wives
- My Sales Rep
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Click hereNeither Arturo nor Bob were young studs and they were spent. Fay felt oddly disappointed that her sexual adventure was over.
As he zipped up, Bob told Fay to send him a proposal and the deal was hers. That was Arturo's doing, having shared Fay's work product previously with Bob.
There was really nothing more to discuss, so Bob said his goodbyes and left. Arturo begged Fay to spend the night, but Fay was anxious to get home and had plenty time to get to the airport. Arturo gallantly offered to drive her, but she was ready to be alone with her very complicated feelings and thoughts.
My phone rang.
- COMMENTS
Xamphosalmost 15 years agoI like the hesitance, but I am disappointed when her big moment came the husband was not there to watch, nor enjoy further.
Maybe a little more persuasion perhaps a striptease in the office before the men got their pleasures.
I think from the ending there will be more sales opportunities this time in front of an audience.
Don2Duskalmost 15 years agoAuthorThanks for using your handle. Your profile does not allow feedback. Why is that? I was able to read your posted story and it sheds some light on your viewpoint. I won't criticize it, and I hope it's not autobiographical. Sorry!
Don2Duskalmost 15 years agoAuthorWrite what you wish, it doesn't offend me. It's just a story: fiction. So far, STD's haven't penetrated this form. I'm not a perfect writer and I will make errors. At some point, I will delete some anonymous, negative feedback. If the commenter needs to hide behind anonymity, then I can't take their comments very seriously.
I do like constructive criticism and I have a thick skin.
My goal is two fold: to please myself by writing and to entertain others who have a taste for the subject.
Thanks for your time.
lancewmalmost 15 years agoHe has nothing better to do than attack LW stories. He says the same thing about every story he attacks, so he cannot be saying any constructive toward your particular story. I thought your writing was clear. Motivations understood, but the story was common to many others here.
Adrianaloves2doitalmost 15 years agoVery enjoyable read. Not everyone's cup of tea but well told none the less. A little work on word use from an editor would improve it to a 100 for me. I will now read your other stories!
Anonymousalmost 15 years agokind of interesting but then all of a sudden your carachters turns assholes. from arturo over the husband and of course bob. the erotic was completly lost with the job blackmail and a husband going behind the back of his wife. pretty poor erotic fantasy if you need to force somebody instead of seducing openly somebody.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoDon't mind 'Yikes!'. His wife left him a few years ago and he's still having problems dealing with his small dick. He's now just a retired 'troll, with nothing better to do than attack LW stories.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoI enjoyed it enough. Keep 'em coming. MC
