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Click here"Christ!" she exclaimed, feeling my cum surging into her.
As my climax subsided, I pumped in and out her a few more times, revelling in the sensation of my creamy seed deep within my sister's love channel.
"You came in me! My brother came in me!"
I smiled and fell into her arms, my softening cock still in her. Her breasts pressed against my bare chest. Never had I felt anything as euphoric as being within my sister's snug, creamy cunt. My prior albeit limited sexual experience paled into nothingness next to the ecstasy of fucking her. We lay in the afterglow of our orgasms, our bodies close and hot, my sister pushed into the couch under my weight. Finally I pushed myself up off her and slid my cock from her slick hole, watching as my white cum oozed out, contrasting with the pinkness of her slit. My sister was silent, her icy blue eyes fixed on the same sight as me. She slipped her fingers into her cunny and rubbed the creaminess of my cum. After bringing some to her lips and licking her fingers seductively, she pulled her white lacy panties back over her oozing pussy. I watched, lightheaded, as the fabric darkened. A wry smile danced on my lips as I noted that these panties had tasted my cream before.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoYour build up is way too long. Way too many cockblocks happening. Just get to the fun part without annoying your readers...
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoHave her wear an anklet in the next story, and suck her toes during sex
Anonymousover 9 years agoit made me think of the time I fucked my sister she was the hottest an the best sex we ever had we fucked ever time we got a chance till we both got married
Anonymousover 9 years agoThat was hot ! Just don't leave it too long before you publish part 3, or I'll go off the boil. Brilliantly told story, well worth 5 stars!
vividlyyoursover 9 years agoYou are an excellent writer with a real gift for phrasing. I particularly liked "The entire summer was a train wreck, starting with that simple laundry discovery which pushed me into an abyss of obsessiveness, of sordidness with my sister's panties, of dreams and angst and lust and guilt," although many other passages were as good. Looking forward to where you take this.
Anonymousover 9 years agoYes, I loved the sex and the incest, but after reading so much on this site, what I enjoyed most was that the writing is literate! I thought the pacing was quite good. You express yourself in complete sentences, sentences that actually make sense. Excellent vocabulary. You spelled your words correctly, as far as I noticed. The two characters are well-drawn and true-to-life.
You did "invent" an awkward word, "debauchedness." If you were trying to avoid "debauchery," there's "debauchment." Try dissipation, venery, profligacy. lasciviouosness, lechery . . . there are lots of synonyms, because it's a very popular sport.
Anonymousover 9 years agoBut all the crap they went through before fucking was unnecessary & didn't ring true.Don't know why he needed to reject her when she came to him looking for her panties,then she didn't want anything to do with him, yet all he needed to do is fix breakfast, buy's her lingerie & she's putty in his hands
in saying that sort of liked the story and am looking forward to next chapter even thou the sex part of the story was below par hopefully you get more into the sex and less of the rest thought after C1 we'd get stuff like golden showers,arse fucking,oral etc etc
maybe next chapters hopefully
Tigersmanover 9 years agoI love it! This story is so erotic. I liked how you paced the action so that it created a sensual image rather than rushing things. Keep up the good work.
