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- COMMENTS
EVLover12 months agoThank you, eidetic, for a wonderfully, engaging tale.
A minor concern from a man who lives near John Wayne Airport/SNA…why did you have them fly through Phoenix on their way to Las Vegas, when there are plenty of direct flights between the two airports?
Anonymousabout 1 year agoOutstanding, impeccable writing (had to go to Wikipedia a couple of times to keep up), excellent story to the end, and the sex was engaging, and creatively written with exactly the right amount of detail.
5 stars are not enough.
A tiny criticism, 'in to' and 'into', and 'a while' and 'awhile' aren't interchangeable. Apologies if auto correct did that.
Strand
Fuzzy_Kbearover 5 years agowell written, well thought out, good humor, great sex. fun characters. would love to read more about all not just Karen and John, but Pam and Billy. Lu and the Professor and Marianne, The places the feel really drew me in, and I love the B&D aspect too was a great touch I'm on the same level not into S&M but the right amount of B&D in the right times perfect. The proposal at the end while a bit rushed actually made since to me and you foreshadowed it so it wasn't unexpected. I saw it coming at the start of the helicopter tour not the specifics but the results. The only thing it's missing in my opinion was the Karen, John and Lu 3-way. That seems like it would have been fun to write and extremely enjoyable to read. All said 5 stars on all five parts and I saved my comments for the end but voted on each. Thank you.
BadHusbandMikeover 5 years agoMore than a little over the top....oh well. I did really enjoy the light story with some good humor.
