All Comments on 'No Halloween This Year'

As much as I loved it, losing a child like that will haunt both forever as good LW but very sad

Gave it 2 stars. Writing hard to follow which hurt an overall decent, if sad, story. Why some parents can't watch their young children is both beyond me & criminal. My wife & I had a pool in the house we lived in. When we weren't using it... or there, I had it locked closed (it was an above ground pool, unlike this story, I suppose). But once my young children were in the pool, one of us was there watching. There's no excuse not to. Bob

Beyond sad !

What a sad tale of horrid regret . Brought out emotions in me , tears will earn you 5 stars . Well written and powerfully delivered and that's really why the 5 stars .

This is not what I come to lit to read. But read it I did, and appreciate it.

Well done.

Rather well done, good prose style, atmospheric - and I saw it all. Judicious understatement really played well, 5*

Very powerful.

Top ratings from me.

[08.10.23]

Powerfull, well written!

11/10!!!!!

Oooo… not your usual fare. So deep. So very well done. Thanks for writing.

Well written… but wow dark AF.

That was quite a grisly story.

This was the penultimate short story that needs no sequel.

The horrible facts hidden behind the story needs no expansion or detailed conclusion.

Rest in peace.

Brilliant story, JimBob44.

Thank you.

Tingles - Very Dark

Eek. Really dark. Unbelievable gullt. No way to.get past that for either one. Amazingly writing.

Wow, what a powerful story! Terribly sorrowful and moving.

Very sad, but a good story nonetheless. Thanks JimBob.

Sad but seems real. 5 stars from Xluckylee

Intense. Well written. With a payoff you don’t normally see on Literotica

WOW! How sad. DMW aka

Brilliantly written. Heartbreaking. Five stars.

Wow. Just fucking wow. This was a hard read, but it shows once again the quality you put out. Life is brutal sometimes, and you write it wonderfully. A sad, but well deserved 5/5.

Too fucking close to home!!😩

An awesome story, but I ask if you have a pool, the child should have been trained in water safety, have been taught how to swim from infancy. If parents have a pool they swim, ie… they teach their children how to survive if they fall into the water. Unless it’s only used as a status symbol to impress their neighbors, they should still know how to swim just in case somebody else falls into the pool.

ouch just wow

Don’t like it but it is a 5.