All Comments on 'No Way Honey: Jan'

FTDS!

Trying is trying to give it a damn ending being lazy and trying are 2 different things this wasn't trying it was being lazy all because of the lack of ending

I really liked this one. An easy 5 for me. It did not bother me that it was not complete-- only one conceivable ending imo and I'm fully capable of filling in the blanks. Nice job and keep on writing.

Wow. That was a mic drop. That isn't just instant divorce. That is the husband getting fully custody and Jan getting at most supervised visits. Ouch. Good for Lilly. Also the son's statement really buried the dagger. Should make it much easier for the MC to move on. Nit sure how British law will work with property division, but in the US, even with no fault divorces, virtually any judge will take the Tuesday trysts with the children in the house into due consideration. She will be paying child support and will have to wait at least 16 years yo get her share of thr house equity. In the US, there woukd be zero alimony. From thr mouths of babies. This should be rated much higher. 5 blazing stars.

out of the mouths of children !

Kids! You've gotta love em'

Finish one of these good stories.

Nice job!

Dumb chit

Another great story. I don’t always like unending stories, but you’ve done it correctly.

Thanks for another great read.

Crap

A good vignette - sufficient as such, and well written!

If you can't finish your damn story don't write it and put it on here and if you can't finish it then don't expect people to give you anything but crap.