Old Country

Very few southern people talk like that and even those that do don’t lay it on that thick. The story was entertaining, but ultimately unsatisfying because of the weak ending. She is a truly horrible person who deserves much more hell than 6 months in a minimum security prison and then getting her job (and husband) back. The main character just got screwed and has nothing to show for it.

Didn’t care for the stereotypical tropes, the exaggerated accent or the lack of knowledge of Alabama. Definitely written by someone that has no clue

A very well written story. That is also exceedingly sad. And I would like to close with: Roll Tide

Agree with commenter from six months ago. There is more to marriage than orgasms. And besides she realized that she coukdnhave had what she wanted with Glenn just way too late. The bigamy was silly, but Travis taking her back is odd. And the blackmail threat was legitimate as she could go to jail, but she could have gotten help from the authorities to set the asshole up. One state won't bother to prosecute her on bigamy in another state. Still well written.

Though all commenters have the right to their opinions, I have to respectfully disagree with most. The story was very well written and the characters were believable. This kind of shit does happen in real life and the responses of all involved rang true. Gotta think the author took someone's story and made it readable.

Thanks for the effort.

And, the big guy is the better cuck! Who'd say so? Very weak men, both husbands.

Good story, well written. It was not the usual cheating story so the originality was refreshing. Keep writing ,please. 5/5

Well thr bigamy ruined the story. And then Travis plans to take her back, because hey great sex! There is more to marriage and love than orgasms. And why submit to thr blackmail? Maybe dominate once, get it on tape what her boss was doing, then threaten to burn him if he reveals (which is what happened). Disgusting that Travis will take her back. Uggh.

Interesting story right up until the point that the bigamy was revealed. Did not see that coming.

Once Glenn and Travis actually started talking and the big secret came out ... It went downhill from there.

The ending felt rushed. There was no real emotion to it. She doesn't contest divorce or annulment. Goes to jail for minimum sentence. Gets her job back. Travis takes her back. The author could have literally written that and saved us a bunch of reading without sacrificing any emotional content.

It might have been more interesting of she had been told about Travis beating Glenn and putting him in the hospital because of her actions. Maybe then she would have actually shown some true remorse and emotion over her actions.

too long, too boring, too much bullshit. unsatisfying end.

If I were her former employer, she would remain as such. She is a ticking bomb. She’s irresponsible and makes horrible decisions while drinking. She’s also a liar and minimizes, and or ignores the consequences of her immature actions. She is a liability waiting to happen. And, she had a felony conviction for dishonesty. Would you take the risk and hire her for a position other than as a receptionist, hostess, or corporate escort?