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"He's in the red!" Samantha shouted. "We've got about twenty-five minutes before he's completely out of air!"
There wasn't a moment to lose. Chris grabbed his torso while Kevin took his legs. They dead sprinted out of the chamber, heading for the ship.
- COMMENTS
Llyanderabout 1 year agoI get that you're using Alien and Prometheus as a inspiration but there's a fine line between inspiration and pretty much just copying.
chipmonk9about 1 year agoYou did everything right for a good story do you should've add-ed a notice at the start a ch if there ain't any sex in it. Also add more details on there oasts on how they joined the crew.
MajorRewriteabout 1 year agoExcellent. I particularly like the build up of tension. When they ignored the precursor warning, we all knew bad shit was gonna happen.
MeWalesabout 1 year agoan excellent start - I want to see where this goes - there is so much potential in this that you would be hard pressed to do anything but write a great story. Well done.
