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Super Hot Story! I loved it. I wanted them to stop when they came out of the bathroom and invite those 5 guys back in to fuck her! Such a Hot Story! 10 stars to writer. LOL it is so easy for games in bars to get out of hand. Been there and done that too! Thanks for a great story on sharing. More would be better Please.

An excellent story...5 stars....I didn't want it to end... in fact I wanted the two guys to get together in front of her...yes!!

This is one sick story. Sorry, but I thought you were going to go btb on her. Instead you went totally cuckold and wimp cuckold at that. Sorry, but that truly wasn't how you started this story. I wanted to watch you do btb, not cuckold. Oh, well maybe no more stories of yours I will read.

Totally sick faggot shit... Should have turned to a BTB story...

Repressed Homosexual fantasies.

Careful what you ask for!

She took it to more than the next level. She knew he would do whatever she wanted and NOW - he has a 'Hot Wife', acyually a slut. Welcome cuck, she's lucky she has such an idiot to take care of her, the five guys at the bar are just a start.

Good story. He did have a low self esteem and a sexy wife. Too bad, now everyone has her.

I don't imagine how that wimpy husband could live with himself eating the stranger's cum out of his wive cunt. How sick is that?

"It was huge baby. I've never been so full of cock in my life. I loved it. So you'd like to hold that cock would you?" she asked. "Maybe you'd like to hold it in your mouth or your ass. Is that what you're thinking?" Yeah, nothing more manly than taking a dick up the ass, I can see why the "loving wife" has so much respect for him. Somehow I can't see anything erotic in the trashing of all the finer parts of marraige...can't see one man taking another man up the ass as erotic, and this isn't the gay category either....or a man becoming a cum whore, which again, has nothing whatsoever to do with the "loving wives" category. I think the story should be moved, and all the male dick lovers in the comments section should move with it. We'd all be happier I suspect....

I thought that this was a pretty damn good story. could have been better though, maybe if there wasn't so much wimpy husband talk and if he didn't eat the cum out of her snatch, cuz personally i find that disgusting... but others would disagree. The thing i loved about it was the feeling of suspense, the fact that they had been faithful up until then, and neither one of them was sure of how far it would go. Awesome. I'm not married, im only 20, but for some reason i love a story about a hot cheating wife. I just hope that when i do get married, my wife will be sexually open enough to do some crazy shit like that and not be weird or regretful about it afterwards.

I liked it but it would have been better if (1) Robert had not made all the nasty remarks. I mean come on. A guy is glad to get a piece of ass and would never, unless he is a complete asshole, talk to her like that. Descriptive dialog could have been done with better words. LIKE " Oh..yes...you sexy thing...you want this cock in your cunt..." ( Yes...yes fuck it in me...oh I love your cock...I wish my husband had a big one like yours...Yes I want him to suck your cum out of me after you finish with me...") " Ohhh sweet thing...you sweet little slut...suck me ...let me shove my cock up your ass.....etc etc... You are without couth and I doubt if you have ever had a peice of ass from a real nice woman...probably street crak whores...you sound like it...

Hot scenario, but the "wimpy husband" format just HAD to poke it's ugly familiar head out of its' cave and say "Yawn". Otherwise an excellent story. I came halfway thru, thank God twice as soon as the ending!

Are you a sick minded whimp cuckhold wanabe? Anyone who sits down and writes a thousand word essay protesting anything "doth protest too much".

Oh Dearest Nemo lets play your game for the MR. Anonymous's everywhere - quit letting your dog fuck your wife just to watch then get some balls to stop sucking her out afterwards.

Also, your neighbors are complaining about the traffic and parking problem caused by your unpublished gangbangs brought home by you & her after 2AM. They want her to get a real man instead of a watcher of other cocks who will at least publish a weekly schedule of your self cuckolding needs so as to keep the neighborhood kids out of it and everyone needs a little more sleep.

Gee - I see why you do that personal ranting thing, but it really doesn't do much in reality. You are still an asshole and I have lowered myself a little in your direction. So sorry bout that - - but not really.

You and the Bazzster just don't get it and probably never will it seems. As it is your right to feel excited about pathetic males into self humiliation - it is mine to say your self scorn surprises me and disgusts me as a semi-normal human.

To be clear it isn't a moral position that you abandon that disgusts me and most others, it is the disrespect you advocate for males and yourself as disgustingly normal in your mind. You also feel that people like yourself, the young and the weak, aren't affected by your unique freaky needs to be demeaned. Well again cock breath we disagree.

If someone disagrees, they have the right to say so just like you have the right to say otherwise. If you walk through life thinking that it's ok to shoot every 5th non-cuckster male you see not hawking his wife for a penny or less to watch where would this world be.

So you see it is about respect of self and the need to counter comment those like you who have none or lose it each night in the quiet room away from your wife or other loved one, who just doesn't understand your selfish needs or won't go along as your whore. She doesn't agree with you either but the children make her captive to you for a while longer - if she can stand being with someone she can't respect - shouldn't respect - doesn't deserve respect.

See - it really is just about respect but that travels with a conscience which you have numbed down to your acceptable righteous level for your comfort sake but not those who know you who remain somewhat normal and likely silent.

Jeez - we are all here to be aroused. It really isn't a moral issue numbnuts. I know that you know what I mean but you plow on in self defense and thats ok - it is your right to be selfishly weak but you need to know that as you grow more dependant you will need more to get there for yesterdays same high.

So rationing for the long haul means spread it out. Don't be so selfish as it will leave you in your later years with only the more extreme fetishes as relief. You won't like that in the proverbial morning - alone is not always good - especially if you don't like the one you are with -yourself.

You have the right to bank some self respect now for use along the way and retirement - you deserve that right as I have the right to caution you for unlike the Bazzster you still have a lucid mind - most of the time - maybe - hopefully.

Think with both hands tonight.

First off can't you come up with a new moniker? "Oh little sick one" has gotten so old it's ridiculous.

Secondly, why don't you follow Nemo's advice and put down a name with your comments. No one will really know who you are so don't be afraid. Or are you that much of a wimp? Come on, Man up beeeeotch!

Thirdly, please take a creative writing course, clear your head, see a psychiatrist, just do something to straighten out your brain functions. I mean I've got to tell you man, many of your rants, the previous one included, read like something Hitler would have composed in his final hours. All that crystal meth is starting to have an effect so get on that show Intervention and get yourself taken care of.

P.S. By the way Nemo Jesus didn't fuck this nut's wife because after several years of small dicked loving he finally found out that his wife was really a man. Jesus just doesn't do shemales.

Dear Mr. Anonymous who posted second after myself:

I went back to my essay from a year or so ago and perused the comments and thought about this. You're right. It's inappropriate for me to threaten -- anonymity and free speech are good and I admit that, when I get carried away, I forget that their sanctity is paramount.

Then I found the third comment on that story trying to degrade me by calling me "young one." It reminded me a lot of your degredation of me as "little sick one." I even consider it possible you're one and the same -- your anonymity, unfortunately, makes it impossible to tell whether you are an army of 10,000 or a lone troll.

So I apologize for threatening you. If I met you, I would not desire to harm you. But I would strongly desire to do something that is apparently quite easy -- I would desire, and I do desire, to offend you.

Being offended is a great sign of weakness, immaturity, and foolishiness. We take offense when we cannot handle something as wonderful and glorious as another's opinion. I try my best to be offended as little as possible. I'm not even offended by you -- but I am troubled. You make me doubt that humanity is innately good, just as I'm sure I make you doubt in a similar way.

But there is a difference. Those of us who push the envelope, who are indeed sick, the worst we can be accused of is having no limits to our expression. We may pervert society's moral structure, but we will never stop another from expressing himself or herself, because we can find value, and Eros, in all forms and contents of expression.

You, on the other hand, and your ilk (if there is, indeed, an ilk of many), believe that some things should be beyond reproach; that some things should be held sacred. Perhaps you think I shouldn't say "fuck your mother," or "fuck your wife," or "fuck my wife," or "fuck jesus," or "fuck George Bush," or "fuck jesus and George Bush at the same time -- how tasty a sandwich would that be!" but what you don't understand is, your small-mindedness therein is one that our society, indeed our world, can no longer sustain. You must endeavor to cease to be offended. You cannot control other people, and thus you must, like all of us, seek to subdue your own reactions when they are not rational.

No one is harmed by these stories except your ego. No, people do not get the idea from these stories and then do horrible things. If they do open up their relationship, then perhaps that is not such a bad thing. Marriages fall apart daily without the intervention of Literotica; we are not evil. But you, my friend, you just might be.

What we want is not pathetic. What you fail to realize is that your insults, calling us "sick" and "little" and "pathetic" and "fag" and "wimp," these are not insults at all. "Fag" is the least insulting -- if you are indeed such a homophobe, you will find yourself sadly alone on this site, and in this world. I am proud to be a sicko. I am proud to love sex in all its variations. I have had more orgasms than you have had fantasies -- and God bless that.

I ask of you one thing, dear Anonymous commentator, if you do return to read my rebuttal: Make yourself an account. It will be untraceable -- don't let anyone send you feedback, comments, or anything. Just make an account so that we can know if you are one person calling us all "sickos" on every story, or if indeed you are an army of thousands. I do not know -- we do not know because you thrive on secrecy while we publish our demented fantasies for all the world to cum over. Please, let us know at least that you are the same you that has been plaguing us for years now. If indeed you represent a majority of readers, then I should only see your name once or twice. If you are willing to be honest with us and show your face, even a masked one (as Nemo is my mask), then we can have this discussion honestly.

I look forward to it.

P.S. Jesus fucked your wife while you watched