All Comments on 'Permission'

Finish the damned story

Worth 1/5

Yes, finish the damn story!!!!

So typical of your incomplete, left hanging, cliff dropping, no ending story.

Just another foolish trying to be faithful reader who again is disappointed.

Супер постоянно гений!

...."Thank you lover. Thank you for loving me enough to trust me on this, and thank you for being mine." But if she loved him enough, she would never ask such a thing of him!

We all come on here to read exciting stories, however in this one it brings in reality that if both don't want it and one is appeasing other it will not work,

In time she will stray, no doubt .

He should just take the pain now, better than taking it afterwards

Nice story, but would have liked more of and ending.

That's it? I've read all that and it is unfinished? That's just BULLSHIT!! If a story is unfinished, it's only half of a story.

good written......but the end is not "literotica"...

No ending??? 3/5

It was good until I got to the damn cliff hanger ending.

Sometimes a story , even your Just Plain Bob, are lame without an ending. Sorry, naturalistic endings are not designed to be used in most every story. In fact they become repetitious and lazy.

With the way it ended I was hoping to scroll down and find another chapter.

Entertaining,if somewhat predictable story right up until the way it ended.

No ending; unbelievable!

JPB...spend 10 bucks and take writing class and learn how to write a story that includes an ending..you pull the no ending shit and has resulted in me avoiding your work

I Gree with most everyone else. I stopped reading anything you write because of your quaint idea of never finishing a story. I don't know what possessed me to read this one, but I'm sorry I did. I'll be sure to check the author next time.

Appreciate the conclusion. Five stars.

Even the request would trigger a divorce. It would be 100 percent certain if I believed that my wife would do it eventually even if I said no. There are lots of honest women out there. Clinging to Kathy would not be a concern of mkine

No ending?

Her explanation sounds like nonsense to me.

It's a shame there was no true conclusion.

I wish you would have written another chapter of this one.

She's testing the waters and he has no backbone.

Stupid is as stupid does!

Chapter 2???

Half a story - 1 star. Does JPB really stand for "just plain bad". Writing and editing are generally pretty good but almost all the stories are left incomplete. Very disappointing.

No ending.....sucks