All Comments on 'Play it Again Sam Pt. 03'

Even though I have read it all before, you write so well that I'm enjoying it as much, if not more than the first time.

Knows loop

Use it

Nope is a dope

Falling asleep here, skimmed over the better part of 2 pages.

Well well, she’s a full blown amoral slut by the time he discovers her secret sex life. A self entitled cake and eat it person. Well written, and the clever use of the diaries to explore/expose the inconsistency of “she loves him, truly, madly, deeply” yet cheats without any guilt on her conscience was great. Its not just the usual LW cheater’s unfathomable incongrouous assertion of “but I love you!”, which always sounds like bullsh*t. Here the self delusion is shown to be heartfelt as its her personal diary, which is private.

good atuff, 5*

Jim

This story is definitely becoming more interesting. The best part of this chapter is the dream sequence and the dialogue between his mother and Nancy. Overall, five stars ⭐️ for this one.