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Click here"I will not fail you." Mystique promised him.
"You never have." He said and she left knowing she had been dismissed. "I look forward to sending you against your lover. Ghost Fire will perish at your hands."
The last words escaped his lips spoken barely above a whisper.
"I will tear down everything and everyone you hold dear. No one thwarts the will of Doom!"
Fade to black.
- COMMENTS
Fseries11 months agoNice concept and story. Seems a little Mary Sue ish for so many awesome things being obtained so quickly and many times haphazardly.
Also, why was such a small amount of vibranium so guarded so that doom didn’t get it if one of his assassins was wielding and wasting vibranium arrows?
Anonymousover 3 years agoI have been blasting through your chapters since I found them. Awesome stories and premise. Keep up the good work..👍👍
Anonymousalmost 4 years ago...just a pet peeve of mine: It's 'disoriented'. There is no such word as 'disorientated'.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoI would rather you heal and feel better than losing a great author I've tracked and been reading since you first posted. My meds are doing well so I should be around to see all of their ends
Zoconjaalmost 5 years agoTake your time lostboy i was just wondering why they hadnt posted it yet take your time everyone who loves your story probably have great patience to be on this site.
Lost Boyalmost 5 years agoAuthorI posted part 6. It was returned and I am sorry to say my health has slowed down the rewrite of the portion that forced it to be rejected. It contained critical portions to progress two different story lines. I should be posting it again either Saturday or Sunday at the latest. Again, sorry for the delay.
Zoconjaalmost 5 years agoI noticed u said u posted chapter 6 a few days ago but it hasnt been posted yet do you have a timetable for how long it takes literotica staff to approve it and post it? Just wonderin
joshua3almost 5 years agoThis series alone has me checking Literotica for updates, and you've done such great work so far. Loved this installment, but I did feel it was weaker than the earlier ones.
This entry felt more rushed for a few reasons, and while I still very much enjoyed it, it did feel like a bit of a letdown relative to the sheer quality of the earlier entries.
Still, can't wait for the next one, and thank you for such a great series!
Lost Boyalmost 5 years agoAuthorTo Lit Reader and othes... there is a cosmic plan in the works. Ghost relies upon his darksaber a lot and it is in fact his namesake. To see if the crystals survived the implosion he will have to venture into the Zone again. This series has been a blast to write and I have some great twists and turns along the way planned. Part six is nearly done and part seven and eight pretty solidly mapped out. LB
dutch513nelsalmost 5 years agoWhat a fun read thank you . Can't wait for the next part would love to read this story from beginning to end .Wish you would publish on smashword so I could get copies of your work .
