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Click hereHis chuckle rumbled softly through the room as he caressed her ass, pressing his fingers between her ass cheeks, she wiggled softly and gently but that only produced another shudder and more cum pressed against his thighs.
They stayed like that for two days, doing nothing more then fucking, occasionally making love, but really just fucking. Eventually Sarah did go off to collage, but plenty of visits were made between the two and some might say that William became softer that summer, softer and perhaps kinder, but in reality...he'd only found an outlet for his own wicked thoughts, allowing him to relax his stance on the wicked deeds of others.
- COMMENTS
HornyKipover 3 years agoMost preachers are a lot like this bastard.... Mean sprited hypocrites. Look what religion has brought us.
The story was adequately written, but no great. The subject was not very entertaining, boardering on rape.
Tangarayover 11 years agoA very good story and well told.You did a good job. Keep writing as you want and in time you will get better and better. Thanks for sharing with us all.
Pandora33103over 11 years agoI thought the story was very good. If the only thing that people can talk about is the spelling, then maybe they shouldn't be reading stuff that is written by amateurs. Keep it up. I have found that when I write I do it in a word processing program that catches any little goofs in the spelling then I transfer it to Literotica.
I like the forced sex. Your descriptions are very vivid, and that is wonderful. Try again, okay?
ShadyTXLadyover 12 years agoPretty good story, however, the numerous spelling mistakes were a constant distraction. Also, some portions were confusing. More proofreading should have been done. I did like the story line of the preacher and his daughter. That's why I read the story.
MtnManslutover 12 years agoAt least get the spelling right on the title, if you want anyone to read this and take it seriously. Not a bad story, just needs some polishing.
Read_it_and_Weepalmost 13 years agoVery well written but you should have ended it with that last paragraph on the 1st page, with "you've only taught me how to make a man please me." The ending you have here is really unnecessary, just reiterating points the reader already knows or could have guessed. By ending it on the 1st page you not only achieve a clever, thought-provoking surprise, but you also put much more power in the hands of the daughter, which makes her much less of a victim which, for me, makes the whole story much more satisfying. Great job, let me know if you need help editing.
Anonymousover 14 years agoi LOVED IT! the twistedness of it! so sweet!! it could of used some other things but thats just me so no worries there, i think your story was great!! we really need more of these two!
--Lya
