Project - Prometheus Ch. 16

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"OH SHIT! FUCK ME WITH THAT BIG DONG KORSA!" Shazza screamed. Korsa did so, but only at half power, not wanting to hurt the poor girl. Almost like she sensed that she was holding back, Shazza ground out a single sentence.

"Fuck me as hard as you can Korsa! Make me your little bitch! TAKE ME LIKE YOU OWN ME!"

Almost instantly, a switch flipped in Korsa and she unleashed her primal, sexual side that she'd kept in check. She gripped Shazza's ass and tits so hard, that there would be bruises in the morning, from the grip alone. Korsa pounded into Shazza, who yelled and screamed in pain and pleasure, riding the edge between both.

"Who owns you?" Korsa got out as she hammered the smaller woman.

"You do!"

"I can't hear you!" Korsa growled and slapped Shazza's ass hard. Shazza yipped and screamed out the response again.

"YOU OWN ME!"

"Good girl! Take that cock and make me cum! Squeeze your ass on my dick! Make me fill... yyyooooOOOUUUUUUU!" Korsa howled as she came, shooting a torrent of her juices into Shazza's ass. The moment it hit her passage, Shazza came, screaming so hard, she lost her voice just before she passed out.

Korsa fell away from Shazza, plonking down on the cold decking, but not caring. She had just cum hard enough to satiate herself to a level she hadn't felt in years. Korsa could have been swallowed by quicksand at that moment and would have died a happy woman. After a few minutes, she finally recovered and stood up, looking down at her lover.

Korsa smiled at the soaking mess they had left behind, knowing that it was well worth it. She carefully scooped up Shazza and walked her over to the bathroom. Korsa turned on the shower to where it was warm, but not too warm. She propped Shazza against the wall of the shower, letting her recover at her own pace. Kporsa was just lathering up with some soap, when Shazza finally stood, her legs a bit wobbly.

"You going to be OK?" Korsa wondered.

"Y-yes, I'll b-be all right. M-my mind is a b-bit fr-frazzled, right now," Shazza said as she leaned against the wall for support. "I hope n-no one h-heard that."

"I enabled privacy mode right after we got in. I thought that you might scream to high heaven before the night was over and didn't want to bother anyone with it. Seems like we both got there, didn't we?" Korsa said, blushing slightly.

"Yes, we did," Shazza stated as she started shampooing her hair. Korsa cleaned her body and toy thoroughly, before she removed it by pressing the same depression as before. After a brief inspection to ensure that it was clean, Korsa then soaped her quim up, then washed herself clean, before stepping out of the shower. Shazza stayed in it a little longer, letting the hot needle spray play along her body.

Once she was done, she shut the shower off and walked out of the bathroom. She was still a little wobbly, but not as bad as before. Shazza saw that Korsa had taken the time she had to change the sheets and was lying bed, waiting for Shazza to join her. Smiling, Shazza slipped under the covers and snuggled up to Korsa.

"Thank you."

"No, no, thank you! I haven't been able to unleash like that in a long time! Are you OK? Did I break anything?" Korsa asked worriedly.

"I can endure more punishment than most people think. I was made that way," Shazza said with a small smile. "That cock of yours though, that is an amazing feat of engineering!"

"It cost me a pretty penny to acquire it, but maybe we can look into getting one for you," Korsa said as she gestured to the toy, which was back in its box. "I do have a question for you though, if you don't mind."

"Sure."

"How much longer are you going to crush on Alex before you do something about it?" Korsa asked.

"W-hat? H-how..." Shazza stuttered.

"It's pretty obvious whenever you look at him. You get this daydreamy look in your eyes when you do and sometimes when he's not around. I get the attraction he causes as... you're not the only one who's into him," Korsa admitted bashfully.

"Aha! Since we're being honest, it's...not just... him," Shazza stated.

"Oh? Who else?"

"Your... daughter," Shazza said quickly.

"Nats?! Really? How did that happen?" Korsa blurted out.

"During the... orgy when we... kissed. I felt a... spark..." Shazza started.

"Oh, sweet Gods and Goddesses! You've got it bad for both of them??"

"And you! Don't think that just because I want them says that I want you any less!" Shazza shot out vehemently.

"Well... thank you!" Korsa said, nearing tears with Shazza's honesty.

"The thing is though, I don't know how to approach them and try to say something," Shazza lamented.

"Well, if you're not that tired, I have a few ideas, if you're willing to listen," Korsa told her. Shazza cozied up to her lover, all ears.

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And that's the end of chapter 16! Chapter 17 should be dropping soon and with it, answers! What is the significance of the various powers that the women now command? What can they do with them? How did they come by them? How can they use them again? Those answers and more, will be coming in successive chapters, with some of said answers arriving in chapter 17!

Anyway, thank you for taking the time to read my work and I do hope that you've enjoyed it! I'm open to constructive criticism and will seriously consider any suggestions made about various story arcs. Please rate and comment on my work down below and ask me questions if you wish, as I love hearing from my fans! If you like what I write, don't be afraid to follow and share, though your views, ratings and comments are quite enough for me.

In the meantime, this is C.H. Darkstrider, signing off to grab a beer and some quality time with the wife! ;) You will attain whatever you most desire, as long as you believe in yourself. Cheers!

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10 Comments
texstertexster8 months ago
More than just dropped letters

Still really enjoying the story, but I do have to agree with the other commenters..:My constructive criticism: The editing (or, more accurately, the lack of editing) in this story tarnishes an excellent plot. The incorrect grammar, including inconsistent tense, improper and extraneous filler words made the past couple of chapters difficult to maintain my suspension of disbelief, which is vital for sci-Fi. I strongly recommend adding another editor or two to your review team.

Michael56SmithMichael56Smith8 months ago

Eating cinnamon buns, ... killing a smelly 70-foot-tall Omega beast, .... first day with the Hephaestus frigate, ... the recovery of the crashed Darkstrider (after evicting the smelly hounds), ... return of many crushed / wrecked sentry-bots, ... both the Darkstrider and the bots need lots of repairs, ... and there was lots of wild sex when the crew got back the Perseus, refer to Korsa's incredible super dildo, ... a very busy chapter, .... and a promise from the author for the start of getting some answers, ... wow, ... that would be awesome, ... ;-) ttfn

Michael56SmithMichael56Smithover 1 year ago

Alrighty then, the gang has colorful powers that can blast through a 70-foot tall smelly old, Omega, Ice beasty, ... and hell yeah, we need some answers for that, ... and now we can add cinnamon to the list of modern-day high-priced items onboard the Perseus that they might use to turn a profit, .... More Sentry-bots, hover sleds, more ships and gear, and finding a short-cut to the Artucian Ark what kind of ship will it be in after centuries under the ice? .... so, yeah, we've got a few questions, but at least we now know how many cinnamon buns Mama K can put away, .... ;-) TTFN

goo_neiggoo_neigover 1 year ago

Found a wrong word here in chapter 16.

The word "coated" in "Just leave out the naughty bits," Korsa stated as the Hermes coated into the hangar bay and landed."

Keeep up the good work

firehorseukfirehorseukover 1 year ago

It seems like the story is hitting plot points without giving it due attention. Magical energies - None of "Did you see what I did? Wow, look at that! Omigosh reactions!". Nothing after coming down from the adrenaline rush. I'm missing the emotional reaction of the characters to suddenly doing magic! The amount of text relative to the importance of the event made it seem like a non-event.

Michael56SmithMichael56Smithover 2 years ago

Okay, grammar police patrol is not fair to your wonderful chapter in this amazing series, but,.. a couple dropped letters that changed the words were a little funny,.. firstly-the Hermes 'coated' into the hanger instead of 'coasted',.. and 2ndly-Korsa 'head' footsteps, instead of 'heard' them,.. and there were others, as well as entire dropped words, again,.. I have been treating these little snafus as a puzzle or a challenge to solve, needing to unlock what the word or sentence was meant to be,.. mostly it was easy peasy,.. My thanks for an enjoyable read, with a bonus puzzle or six,.. eagerly awaiting chapter #17,.. ;-) TTFN

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Editing Not up to Your Usual High Standards

I felt myself being kicked out of the story as I struggled with words in various sentences that were just flat wrong. It appears the spelling tool used substituted totally incorrect words as it worked through the story.

You are normally an excellent writer and fabulous story teller. I hope subsequent chapters return to your usual high standards. Please keep writing as you are truly gifted.

Live long and prosper!

DOS

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Magical superpowers are super sexy! Thank you!

C.H. DarkstriderC.H. Darkstriderover 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you for the kind comments and I'm glad you liked it! If you're curious about how Alex was beaten down and taken out of the fight so easily, let me break it down. The Omega is around 70 feet in height, and something that big is going to have the weight to go with it. So, it would be the weight of a small blue whale, which generally weighs in somewhere around 50-70 metric tons. The force of a full backhanded slap from a creature that big, would be enough to smash someone into jelly, if they were just in clothes, as opposed to a full armor suit. That's how he was taken out of the fight so quickly.

Having the ladies deal with the Omega was more logically motivated than about being politically correct. Just because one guy is taken out of the fight, doesn't mean that capable soldiers shouldn't step up, be they men or women. I've always believed that if you have the skills and knowledge to do something, then you should. It doesn't matter what you look like, where you come from or what your gender is.

Anyhoo, I'm happy to hear that people reading this tale are liking it and don't worry, it won't be ending anytime soon! There is far too much for me to do do with this story and there are innumerable places and directions I can and will go with it! Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Lesbians who sometimes like d*** may love this chapter. Interesting that him get one box and was out of the fight. The very capable women were left to deal with Omega. Politically correct. Smart move.

Plot thickens. Pace picks up. A few words left out, I still got the story though. Good effort.

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