Project - Prometheus Ch. 24

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Michael56SmithMichael56Smith8 months ago

Okay. Listen up! I am hearing and reading much confusion and the mixing up of the terms for 'Robot' and for 'Android', these things are NOT interchangeable. That would be like equating a luxury automobile with a child's tricycle, two very different things, that just happen to both be on wheels, .... Are we clear? Alright then, no more if this nonsense, ... 'nuff said, ... ;-) ttfn

Michael56SmithMichael56Smith8 months ago

@bourbononiceover 1 year ago --

"whatever happened to machinists mate Anita Marino, the third survivor in cryo"

-- that would be the cryo-pod that Shazza slept 6 centuries in, .... Anita died with the rest of the Perseus's crew, ... too bad a few more of the original crew could not have survived, but ladies of the Darkstrider's crew are wonderful, .... ;-) ttfn

Michael56SmithMichael56Smith8 months ago

Okay, the crew is going to the Broken World, a paradise that's growing the most potent medical plants in all the known galaxy, ... I expect the Darkstrider gang to find and do lots of fun and interesting things there, ... and who knows, they could learn something(s) too. I am hoping that Star Witch gets to fight her new ship(s) soon, ... I am also loving the AI evolution, thanks loads, ... ;-) TTFN

Michael56SmithMichael56Smithover 1 year ago

I do hope that Jaesa can find a safe way to send Laura some reparation funds for her loss of Delilah. Also, the lovely and deadly Delilah will make another sexy addition to the Darkstriders' beautiful crew, and will help to crank up Stanley's artificial Libido, ... fun times ahead, ... ;-) TTFN

firehorseukfirehorseukover 1 year ago

@bourbononice

I wondered that too and had to re-read it several times before coming to the conclusion that it was Shazza. She must have taken over Anita's chamber. But its not explained in the story ... which is why you are wondering about it. Would have been easy to explain it especially as Alex noticed her name, then must later have come to the conclusion Shazza was in Anita's chamber, but no mention of it in the story.

I think the author must have forgotten about it. Or it got accidentally deleted in a draft.

firehorseukfirehorseukover 1 year ago

"Likely they were after the bounty on their heads," Inari grumped. - Seriously? A crack team goes into an area without checking status of known bounty on existing crew members?

"bounties on them haven't yet expired, but they should have" - No excuse for characters. Very poor plot execution. Illegal bounty. Private bounty, etc, anything not on the 'bounty' system would get you off the hook. "I checked and it has expired" would get characters off the hook rather than 'they didn't bother checking'.

"So, giving her back is out. Keeping her would also mean that we would be on the hook for a great deal of credits. Not that we can't afford it, but still," Korsa went on, laying out a few options.

So the morals of stealing an expensive Delilah got wiped away pretty easily! Only Korsa, Nat, Jaesa and Stanley talking about it. What about the views of the rest of the crew? Did Laura deserve to lose her robot? Can't Laura put a bounty on them for stealing her robot?

bourbononicebourbononiceover 2 years ago

what ever happened to machinists mate Anita Marino, the third survivor in cryo

Michael56SmithMichael56Smithover 2 years ago

Alright, going to the Broken World, a paradise that growing the most potent medical plants in all the known galaxy,.. I expect the gang to find and do lots of fun and interesting things there,.. and who knows, they could learn something(s) too. Loving the AI evolution, thanks loads,.. ;-) TTFN

C.H. DarkstriderC.H. Darkstriderover 3 years agoAuthor
Your kindness is much appreciated!!

Thank you for the kind words and encouragement!! It's always gratifying to hear that my readers and fans are enjoying this story this much! In answer to your question, I am in good health and am still writing, so no worries. Telfer is MIA?!? That's news to me! Odds are that Tef is just taking a few beats to rest. I mean, the dude is a literal writing monster, writing as much as he does, but even monsters need rest. On your other question, no, I do not know the man and no, we are not the same person, lol!

I am still posting a new chapter every month, but this month was for Project Prometheus, while last month was a posting for Gaia's Champion. I've been staggering my chapter releases, as a means of keeping a decent pace and keeping my sanity intact, lol! As much as I would love to be able to write more, I lack the time to do so. Unless by some miracle I was to reach my final goal on Patreon overnight, the releases will continue to be staggered in their release. Again, thank you for the kind words, as they spur me on to keep creating and writing for everyone's enjoyment! Cheers!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Awesome Read. Please continue posting new chapters!

C.H. This is and continues to be an awesome read. Hope all is well, as we have not seen a new chapter since August... FYI, your fellow writer Tef has fallen off the planet and we have not heard from him since Aug as well. Any chance the 2 of you are the same person or know each other well?

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