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Click here"So what's all this about? Did I pass?"
Ellie took a deep breath and said, "Robbie, we're friends. That's all.
We end up in bed a lot because we both enjoy it, but we're not in love, so we must be just friends. Shh." Her finger on his lips stopped him interrupting. "I've tried monogamy -- several times -- and it hasn't worked out well for me. So I'm trying something different. I knew about B and Kelsey before I decided to go out with you. I knew B by reputation before I even met you, so I guessed one boy and one girl wasn't the norm in your life. I chose you anyway, Robbie and not to try and change anything. Now, I have to get to work and you, Darling, have guests to entertain. I'll see you later." She kissed him gently but passionately then stood up. "Don't wear him out, girls. I want him back tonight."
Ellie walked to the door quickly, before Robbie could stop her and before she changed her mind. The door clicked shut behind her. She took a few more deep breaths to calm herself as she waited for the elevator. She didn't want to change her mind... She really didn't... That was a moment of epiphany for her. She didn't need Robbie all to herself. As she stepped into the elevator she actually felt good about what she'd just done. The anxiety of her Gethsemane moment in the bathroom had all gone.
By the time she reached the foyer, she was already looking forward to Robbie's gratitude later.
'If you love something, set it free. If it comes back to you it's yours. If it doesn't, it never was'. That was the whole of the quote. Ellie mentally edited it. 'If you love someone, set him free. When he comes back to you he's yours.'
- COMMENTS
visionlessoneover 6 years agoI happen to be blind, so I found this story more than a little intriguing. I particularly liked some of the humor early on.
btw, I happen to be totally blind myself. Some of the points in the character development of Robbie needed a little more defining, but on the whole, not bad. My only problem is that I never got as lucky. Ah well, it's still nice to read a good story. :)
ShannonBlackwaterover 7 years agoI enjoyed this story so much! Wonderful character portrayal. I'm going to miss them! Thank you so much for sharing this story. Keep writing
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoAfter reading this story, I have to comment!
This is my favorite!!
Anonymousover 12 years agoOne of the best that I have ever read and I have read many in my time.
It being writen by a femail made it all the better.
I can olny say that I completly agree with the other comments about it.
LaLaLadidahGirlalmost 13 years agoOmg that was SUCH a cute, sweet story! I loved it!! I did not find many fatal grammar mistakes, only a few minor ones (including spelling). Your overall storyline was great, and I loved all of the characters (except Finn..... and Georgie, I guess). The sex scenes were pretty good, but my favorite was when Robbie turns Ellie on from simply touching everywhere but the crotch area, and when she finally begins to climax, he starts fingering and further intensifying the orgasm. That was unlike most of the "fuck like crazy" scenes that make up a majority of Literotica.com. And that scene, along with almost every other scene was very thoroughly enjoyed. The details were well put, and the romance was so cute. However, I didn't really like par of the ending. Robbie just proved how faithful he was, so I believe Ellie should have treasured that and keep it that way instead of letting two other girls have sex w/ her guy. I mean, she loves him (despite her "we're friends except at night" speech)!! The only suggestions I could give are to maybe add some more humor. Edit the ending a bit. I DID like the quote part, though, so just tweak the events around a bit (but this is STRICTLY a suggestion only made out of my own opinion that could easily be dismissed; the story is yours, and amazing with or without the edit). And explain the bar scene with Finn a little more clearly (I understood it well, but I felt as if a bit more detail couldn't hurt).
In conclusion, you did a wonderful job, and I found this story incredibly heart warming as well as exciting (if you know what I mean). ;)
18 <3 / 23 <3
Keep it up!
~~ LaLaLadidahGirl ~~
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoNot you, Adam. That prick who suspects a girl's motives if a man has money.
I was going to comment on the story but that prick has made me so mad...
Just because we're attracted to men of wealth and influence, doesn't mean we're selling ourselves. Men like that are just usually better groomed, more confident and more charismatic. Charisma is important. Basically, we like alpha males, which is why they're alpha males in the first place.
I suspect the anonymous sexist pig is just not getting any and thinks not having money is the reason why.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoAs this is the first erotic story of a 'blink' I have experienced in my readings, I thought you did an excellent job of portraying the what the sight impaired person needs to get around. With that said, I am always disappointed when the male is wealthy and well connected. Sorta makes me wonder about the motivation of the female character.
Thanks for your story.
ohioalmost 14 years agoHot and sweet, to put it briefly. Emotionally engaging, charming, beautifully written, very sexy.
Thanks!
ohio
sleeplessgurlalmost 14 years agoWell done. Very well written, and I loved the build up between Robbie & Ellie. I thought the ending was intriguing. Looking forward to the sequel. :)
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoThis story was so well written and the sex was highly engaging. Thank you for another wonderful submission. I do greatly enjoy reading what you've been up to inside that fantastically perverted mind of yours.
Sadly, I have to agree with the other comments on the general dislike for the ending. This was a rather long story and finding, in the end, Ellie suddenly flippant regarding Robbie's desire to be faithful was, I felt not only unrealistic, it was disappointing as well.
However, with your admission of this being a 'cliffhanger' story, I will have to say that I'm very pleased and anxious to see what happens next. But please, next time you may consider letting your faithful readers know when there will be a continuation of the story they've just read.
tawdryAudreyalmost 14 years agoDarling, don't listen to them. I loved it. The whole blind man's sense of touch thing reminds me of that film with Val Kilmer, where he's a blind masseuse.
50 Ways To Please Your Lover? Is this going to be another Simon and Garfunkel moment from you?
Even your musical tastes are... perverse.
x x x (P.S. 200 miles is NOT too far to come to cum. I'll be waiting.)
adam applebiteralmost 14 years agoAuthorFeedback so far, while welcome, all centres on a missunderstanding. The end of the story is not 'the end of the story'.
It's called a cliffhanger. 'Promises' and my previous story 'Touch But Don't Look' both brough us to the same decision point. The next story in the sequence, 50 Ways To Please Your Lover, picks up Robbie and Ellie's story and moves it forward.
Will he take his guilt-free pass? Or will he chase after Ellie?
You'll all just have to wait and see. That's why it's called a cliffhanger.
So please, stop telling me how it should end, because I'm already 7000 words ahead of you.
Thanks for the feedback all the same.
Kamattlockalmost 14 years agoWith the character you developed for Robbie the ending doesn't really fit it should be just him and Ellie.
