All Comments on 'Pussy Whipped!'

The husband's not p-whipped or hen-pecked. He's a guy who has a wife who loves him and got his attention without having an affair. Great story!

A five for sure. This was a lot better than all those burn the bitch to the ground stories.

Cool refreshing story

I seldom leave comments but this story was like a breath of fresh air in a crowded room. Great job!

Loved the turn around of the main male character. Keep up the great work.

I my self have been married to the "Love of my Live" for 47 years, which meant a lot of give & take on both sides. All said & done, I guess I am Pussy Whipped also. Great Job!

That's a nicely contrived story with a happy ending. I like happy endings, especially when a character is straightened out by love. Somewhat juvenile, though, until the last third of the story. How about a 4.5 rating?

Very real moments. People create their own private hells and then try to draw others in.

I thought it was spot on.

And, I'll give you an hour to draw a crowd. You stupid SOB.

People may nitpick about typos and quote them all day long, but I read a lot. And I know a good story when I see one. And did the previous commenter see the foreword apologizing for the spelling and grammar errors? Give the author a break, will ya? It's not as though you took the time to write anything. Besides, I enjoy Carvohi's stories and if you don't, then read something else. Just thought I'd add my.02...

It really is a story about reality

...but as usual, shot down by lousy writing.

Example? Here's just one: "...fuck the all neighbors."

Also, "disaggregated" - well, nice try, but misused.

Besides, it's so unrelentingly cloying.

Really, get an editor. This might have been something.