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"Jenny!" Sam's tone finally broke through Jenny's haze of relief. "I'm actually here for him." Though she hated disappointing Jenny, she pointed, not at Mike, but at Aaron.
- COMMENTS
DwarfLord5022 days agoWhat a great start to this story! I love your writing style and turn of phrase. When you compared the packing supplies to tumbleweeds, I knew it would be a hit.
FyreHeart5 months agoFor Anonymous: Niamh is pronounced “neeve”, with the letters “mh” producing a “v” sound in the correct spelling of the Irish form.
Anonymous6 months agoHow do I pronounce "Niamh"? Saying it sounds like Eve is not very useful, since there seems to be 5 different sounds. I assume the first 2 sound like 'Nee", but the rest is guessing.
Considering Jenny's caustic nature, Sam's surprise announcement seems like a bomb about to go off, repeatedly.
Anonymous6 months agoYou're nailing this for me. The tone feels good, the characters are compelling, you've got uncertain back-stories and foreshadowing to look forward too, and good natured conflict.... Good job, thanks for your writing!
Anonymous7 months agoExcellent work, I definitely like the twists your adding and the changes of scenery compared to others. Looking forward to more chapters from you!
Kernflakes7 months agoTo the anonymous who responded to me, while it's not popular here, it still in over in the Uk, Irland and Scotland.
Also, this series is listed as a 2 part series, so I hope you aren't leaving it here at two postings and it's just a typo. We need more
