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"Dana, I'm going to cum soon." James moaned. Dana gave no indication she had heard. "Dana? I'm going to cum." He said again, a little louder. She gave a muffled 'uh-huh' sound and kept at it. That was more than enough for James. His dick twitched hard and he felt the first spurt go. Dana made a small noise, but she did not stop sucking. James tried to keep his grunts soft and low. When he had finished, he was breathing heavy, feeling very relaxed and absolutely wonderful. Dana kept at his softening dick for a moment longer, looking for any more of his cum that he might have missed.
She crawled back up to James and rested her head on his chest. She had liked doing that for him. She had been a little nervous, that she would mess it up, or it would end up being gross, or something like that. She just tried to remember what she had seen in the few porn videos she had watched on the internet and tried to do that. She found soon after she started that she liked the taste and the feeling of having his dick in her mouth. She had been scared at the end, as well, when he said he was going to cum, but she was determined to at least try for him. She was glad she did. She liked the taste of that as well.
"Dana, that was wonderful. Where did you learn how to do that? Because that was pretty damned good for just guessing." James said, his fingers toying through her hair.
"Internet porn. I watched a couple videos. Tried to do what they did." She said.
"Well, you did it great." He said. Dana scooted up and kissed him. For a moment James was mindful of the fact that she had just been sucking his dick, but quickly dismissed it. After all, she had kissed him after he had gone down in her, and it was something that came from his own body, so it couldn't that bad to begin with.
Dana curled up close him, her back pressed tightly to his chest, his arms around her. She could feel his dick up against her ass, and she liked the feeling of it there. She worked her hips a little further back and drifted off, smiling in the dark.
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Sunlight was just creeping in the window. James looked up and saw Dana. She was sitting next him, still naked, sketching quickly. When she saw him stir, she set it aside.
"Sorry. You looked comfortable. I wanted to get it on paper. It looked peaceful." She said with a little smile.
"No problem. Good morning." He answered.
"Good morning." She answered, leaning over to give him a quick kiss.
"I guess it's off to the living room for me." James said, sitting up.
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James was sipping his coffee when mom walked in. She poured a cup and sat with him.
"So what do you think your chances are of the work from home thing going through? I know you said it should, but do you think it will?" She asked.
"I think so. I qualify. I have a year in the field, and not just in the field, but in the firm as well. I don't think I've ever made any big mistakes, really. Nothing on big accounts, or anything that cost anyone anything. On the line that asked why I was requesting it, I wrote that I was trying to help my family, and that I could do that better from home, as opposed to two towns over. So I think it has a good chance of happening. I don't see why it wouldn't." He said.
"Well, I hope it does. It would mean a lot to Dana, I'm sure, and it would mean a lot to me." Mom said before standing. She went to get ready for work,
James watched her go, and thought about what he was doing. He tried to weigh everything carefully and objectively in his mind. He thought of Dana. He thought of work. He thought of his parents. He thought of his future. And he thought of Dana again.
James stood and went to talk to Dana, a small smile in his lips.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoCaucasian women tend to call it a cock, especially once they get out of college.
Anonymousover 5 years agoI have loved your stories so far. All of them. I really like how you call his dick a “dick,” instead of “cock.” I truly hate reading all the stories online when they use cock as their word for his dick. Reading “he had a nice cock,” or “His cock was hard as she....” I’ve never understood how ppl feel that it makes the scene sexy or even good for that matter. But hardly anyone calls a mans penis a “dick” in their stories, but I’m thrilled you do, I just feel it makes for a better reading. Maybe because in real life no one ever calls it a damn cock so it sounds silly. Anyway sorry about my rant, just wanted u to keep it up 😁. On another note, your stories are great, your very talented and great writer. I hope you keep posting more stories. I’m about done with them all 😩!!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoHard to believe the level of change could happen so fast and that Mom is so oblivious of her role in all this.
But certainly a well-written story.
Wordcraftover 7 years agoAnonymous, your comments make yourself sound like an uneducated and uninformed know-it-all. I cut and pasted a few of your own errors:
I'm scared to (too) The thought the author is conveying is that the female character is scared to DO something, per the context of the dialogue, and not that she was scared ALSO. All rules pertaining to grammar, syntax and spelling can be ignored when writing dialogue. Few people speak with perfect grammar or sentence structure. To convey a believable character the dialogue needs reflect environment, profession, locale, ethnicity, intellect, education, (or the lack thereof) personality type, and yes even a character's' mental state of mind.
James' (James's) Either usage conveys possession, ownership, or pertaining to, and has the same meaning, and is acceptable in literature in both forms. The author only needs to stay consistent and stick with one or the other.
Her while body was tense The author is describing the physical reaction of a person in anticipation of a moment, such as a Football player in a three point stance anticipating the snap of the football or a baseball batter in anticipation of a pitch.
People can and often do tense up even in anticipation of something good or exciting.
Ever see videos of people all tensed riding a roller coaster while screaming their heads off in sheer delight?
Wakingdown, please ignore this troll.
Hidalgo1001almost 8 years agoThe story moves forward. I can't put it down. I'm so wrapped up in it I find that I'm dreading their parents finding out at any moment.
clearedtofuckabout 8 years agoWhat a nice story. For those who have harsh criticism, why don't you learn to contact the author privately. It just makes you look like a pompous ass when you do it on a public venue. I really liked the story. There are mistakes, but we're not professionals here. Please remember that it was FREE to read. No Pesos. Rant off.
Anonymousover 8 years agoI'm scared to (too)
liked (having) her back
Her while body was tense (GARBLED AND MEANINGLESS OUT OF CONTEXT!!!!)
finger tips (fingertips)
James' (James's)
polo (shirt)
real quick (really quickly)
set-up (setup)
peg board (pegboard)
tools are neural (neutral)
form the railing (from)
lap top (laptop)
foot step (footstep)
street light (streetlight)
all together (altogether)
finger tip (fingertip)
they drifted of (off)
down stairs (downstairs)
where ever (wherever)
over whelmed (overwhelmed)
with whom he had fallen in love (-with)
laying down (lying)
she usual had (usually)
light touched were all (touches)
up stairs (upstairs)
his cum that he might have missed (she)
he had gone down in her (on)
up close (to) him
