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Click hereIf jealousy is not a measure of love, then why does she question my love for her when we're having sex?
"Do you love me.... when he fucks me?"
I can't answer her, not when she moans his name while we fuck. I just stare at her like she's a real doll. My wife's eyes roll to the back of her head as she slides back and forth on my pillow. Her breath is shallow and constant like a manic steam clock and I'm forced to count every second of her pleasure. She licks her lips with a whip of the tongue and looks at me with wallowing eyes. She holds me tightly with one hand and orders me to pull on her proud nipples.
This hard lump of flesh clamped between my finger and thumb is the only fulfilment I give my wife as another man fucks her sternly. I cannot watch men have intercourse with the woman I love. So I kneel by her side and divert my attention away from her fucker. My eyes explore her perfect bouncing breasts, her long supple legs and beautifully distorted face. I close my eyes and I imagine it is my cock that satisfies her, my pelvis that slaps against her firm ass and that it is my name I hear her chant over and over.... But she snaps me back to reality with a violent yank and looks at me as if she doesn't want me to miss a second of her glory.
She pushes me back onto the bed, slides off his impressive horn and bends over to give me head. She knows my penis like the back of her pill packet. Before I know it I'm hard.... But my cock has already been spat out, he's back at it fucking her deep from behind and my wife is drooling over my genitals. She doesn't even realise he's pounding her so hard that her head is ploughing my groin, like a cleaner trying to mop a pool of used engine oil on a polished floor. The pain from a skull grinding your testicles pales in comparison to the agony your heart yields when your wife tells you she's organised a threesome on the night of your wedding anniversary.
My wife climaxes, but before I can make eye contact with the pole driver and give him a high five and a slap on the ass, my wife spins around and squeezes my semi-erect penis up her anus. This is the last place I want to be, because what comes next is the most disturbing biphobic experience I must endure of all my wife's sexual rituals.
I'm on the bottom of the human sandwich smothered in my wife's hair. I'm nothing more than a human butt plug or an asshole shock absorber or perhaps a drip tray for body fluids at best. But that's not the worst of it. I can handle the euphoric screaming from my wife, the intertwined orgy of shaved and hairy legs and the mild symptoms of claustrophobia and asphyxiation. What I can't handle, what I despise most of all when I participate in D.P. with my wife, is the pleasure I get feeling another mans dick in my wife's pussy sliding back and forth against my rock hard cock.
It's a deadly sin and a pleasure that should never be shared between two heterosexual men. I want nothing more than to relieve one-third in this threesome, to negate the need for a third party participant, yet allow my wife the pleasure of double penetration with just little old me. This is the reason why I desire for the most absurd thing in the entire world, to be mutated with a freak show gift. I wish to have a Rhinoceros' head between my thighs and the honour to fulfil my wife with a pair of magnificent horns.
IN THE END
Written by A. Case 2013 ©
Boy, that was one screwed up piece of crap. Written by a monkey with a keyboard.
@ HardYakka There are 3 categories:
Dear HardYakka CUCKOLD IS ONLY HUSBAND IS. If somembody divorces from his wife or his wife is died that man is not cuckold. He may be WAS CUCKOLD X years ago, but those male fellow buddies are single men again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Sometime good mate candidate for single, betrayed (with cheating, violance, drug, alcoholic abuser husbands) wives, single moms!
1. Clueless cuckolds, who will never know their wives cheated on them and there are who know their wives cheated when they divorce their wife (with other reason) or when their wives dies............The DNA test shows other paternity.......etc....
2. Unwilling cuckolds who divorced, (yes killed, but this is 20 years prison) their cheating wives. If the cheating wife is ex wife they will loos their cuckold name.
3. There are WILLING CUCKOLDS who are in two groups:
3.1. The wimps! Who do not like their wives cheats on them, but they remain with the cheating cunt, because for the children, for their seriouse illness, for patetic reasons.
3.2. The cuckolding sex minority male people. They are sex minority!!!!!
Definitely not for me but well written. I hope you find an audience which can appreciate your writing.
Where was the "Cuck Alert" at the beginning of this story? Shame on you.
Thanks anonymous for your great feedback, it's been most valuable and the best so far. Maybe you're right and I should toughen up, but if a reader or critic tells a writer to throw themselves off a cliff, at least give them a reason to die (so they can write about it before they take the plunge). I have to agree with you if this was a cuck story then it really does suck, but as the title and description suggests it is an erotic story about about jealousy. Finally you can't assume anything about a author of fiction (especially one who writes in first person). In my writing I take on many guises. In my next erotic tale I'm a gorgeous brunette taking a shower who realises she's being watched from outside her bathroom window. So next week I'll be pissing off all the voyeurs that visit @ literotica. I guess I like to be the deer in front of headlights.... does that fetish even exist?
Its not that you cant write as there is talent there the thing is over the last year we have gone from one cuck story every couple of days to so called writers spinning out crap like this daily. There is only one good cuck story writter and that is goodhusband write like that u might get respect write shit like this where you state he cant watch his wife get fucked when a cuck loves to watch the look on her face when she is pleasured.
Next u might have talent but this story is terible and if you cant stand the heat created by your work then turn off all coments and ignore all emails finally to betrayed i dont read your work because at least you have the balls to put on top that its a cuck story however try listening to the complaints we might offend you but most try to help also i understand you write about your wife and i respect you for trying here
I have no time for willing cuckolds. They are despicable to their gender, as natural a feeling as there is. But you recognize your illness and wish deeply to fix it. For you I have time.
despite not understanding some of the actions which seem to be occurring. I think it may have been deliberately expressed in a fashion to appear sophisticated, or to challenge the reader's literary experience! From what I (think I do) understand about this story, I rate it 4*. His pain is expressed palpably (and Sweetie is getting 'adventured' very thoroughly!)
I agree that Hubby has one (maybe two) fundamental task(s) - examine his own status vis-a-vis where his commitment to, and relationship with, Sweetie is under present conditions! (Assumes Sweetie has changed her overt sexual posture within this marriage!)
If he still loves and is deeply committed to her, then his second task is to sit down with her (minus distractions - like another Dude's dick rubbing against his on the other side of some thin Sweetie membranes!) and discuss her sexual 'must-haves' and his discomfort and preferences.
If he decides that the pain exceeds his tolerance and her actions exceed what he would have accepted in a fiancée, then he is just wasting time he could better use packing his skivvies!
I could feel the pain of the husband through your writing.
You should proud that you offended the nutless, closet cuckolds so much that you got a score of less than 2 on a 4.5 story.
Please keep writing.