All Comments on 'Right There the Whole Time'

Should it be in Romance - a successful love story? Not even a fling of non exclusivity during those 4 years? Or remorse in later part of life of not having tasted others before marriage and so craving for hall passes? Then only it would fall here.

An excellent telling of a simple (in every good way) but very pleasing story.

Thank you.

Well written and hot , and not a cuckold one . Refreshing to read a story with such passion and love without any chucks , sluts or bulls !

Absolutely super, beautiful story, but it's a Romance all the way, not Loving Wives. Please don't ruin ruin their story with a follow-on story involving cheating :-)

a truly romantic and lovely story. well done and in good taste. 5 stars of course.

Such a nice story. So different than the usual stories on this site. It was so nice to read about people in love at a young age. 5 stars from Xluckylee

A well-written story about a truly loving wife (so, no way it should be in Loving Wives *smile*).

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A fantastic love story, 5+ *

very wrong cat maybe first time cat or erotic coupling cat

Sorry, I agree with Enderlocke that this is in the wrong cat. It should be Romance or something good story though enjoyed it

Romance, not Loving Wives. Well written though.

This gotta have a reason it's posted here and not in romance. Probably a sequel incoming. I mean marrying the first real relationship, army, long distance....it practically writes itself.

I'm gonna go with those who said 'great story' and 'definitely a loving wife' and 'it's in the right category' and 'five stars' !

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Yes... five stars for sure.

Idiots arguing that this story doesn’t belong in LW need to STFU. Somehow fetish cuck stories, gay male, lesbian, ir,BDSM, and all such garbage are welcome. But put a story about an actual loving wife and the cuckroaches lose their little minds.

Sweet story, but it is definitely not a LW story....definitely belongs in Romance.

Also, one bit of a continuity issue, after the first handjob and he came all over her face and himself, they continued to have sex then got dressed and left.....all with cum on her face and hair and his chest? Shouldn't they have washed it off? Dove into the pool to do we off? Or in this world you are writing in, people regularly walked around covered in cum?

Great story of Young Love. Reminds me of my wife and myself. Nothing like young love. Thanks for your writing.

What a sweet, well-written story. Very hot, and a beautiful description of two virgins’ first time. Probably should have been placed in the Romance section, because there was nothing sick or twisted enough to warrant calling it a Loving Wives story! But Bravo, just the same.

5 stars NOT enough

The is one of the best stories I have ever read. This story brought back memories of me when I join the military and had to leave the young lady of my life, who I dating before I went into the military. We constantly wrote letters back and forth as I served my time in the military, but sadly we broke up during my first year in the military. Since she and I were dating others, I assumed that I would never see or hear from her again.

But, as luck would have it, we reunitied through letters near the last year of my military service. I took three weeks of leave back home asking her to marry me. She agreed to married me and we had a son a year later. We lived happily (I thought) for 12 years until she had a long affair with her boss at a local hospital. We devorced and remarried while still live in the same area, but only had contact when there was an event with our son and his family.

Amidst all the filth, this is a beautiful story. Beautifully written. Thank you. And thanks for reminding people about the struggles of coping with combat, after the fact, and of how horrible the experience was for those vets. God bless them.

Perhaps many of us have been in their shoes (lives). Well written story with a delightful ending. What I call a Feel Good story. Nice way to start my day. Thanks for sharing it. 5*

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So well told, the descriptions were so down to earth and real, the characters were , for a change, based on real people.

A story worth the time reading.

Thank you for writing it.

A sweet, beautiful story, and the best part is I never got the feeling it would go off the rails. Worth every one of five stars. And more.

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JPB NOT BOB