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Click hereScared a moment Mellos stretched her arms out as Sam was doing. Then she felt what Sam was doing, a broad smile on her face as she almost doubled what Sam had put up.
"Looks like the war starts now Mellos, I hope you're ready." Sam told her, then he noticed that she had almost as much power as he had. Damn this ought to be interesting.
Reads like a report. Misspellings everywhere, typos, words left out, grammar is appalling and just the wrong word at times that makes no sense. However it’s the arbitrary percentages THAT DON’T AD UP that’s done me in. 95% plus 1% an hour equals 100% in 5 hours not a full day or 24 hours.
I’m finally done.
I have a great amount of different categories of genres of stories I like. Some enjoy for a wank others love purely for the story. The latter is so for this series. Found it and bing-read all the way through it all over 2 days. Can’t wait for the next chapter. I can feel it’s about to get good. Keep up the good work
i enjoy the shit out of reading this story and others you have written.
just wish it wasn't so long in between chapters.
Jesus I love your stories I’ve read them all and enjoyed every chapter. This latest chapter sets up a monster chapter next and I’m going to be checking daily so please get to work lol. Thank you