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Click here"No thank you," she said, not giving any other reason.
When he kept asking her I told him to lay off. She was my guest and I didn't want her badgered. I couldn't believe it when Sheila said, "She's not much into partying; I'll dance with you Bob."
I was a bit peeved but just gave her a dirty look. When she came back to the table she told me she didn't do anything wrong. She just danced. Later she danced with Ray and I talked with Olivia. Later when Carlos asked Sheila to dance I was a bit pissed.
"Olivia, would you like to dance with me?" It was a slow song and she said yes. I held her in my arms and she felt so good. She put her head against my shoulder. I felt the damn butterflies in my stomach.
I was almost sad when the song ended. Back at the table Sheila didn't say anything but gave Olivia a dirty look. Sharon, Carlos' wife, came over and said 'hi'. Sheila asked me to dance, but I looked over at Olivia. I really didn't want to leave her alone at the table.
Sharon said she would talk with Olivia while I danced with Sheila. Sheila held me tight and moved my hands down to her ass. I kept them there for a few seconds and returned them to her waist. She kissed me on the dance floor. I guess she wanted everyone to know that we were together.
After arriving back to the table Sharon got up to leave. She gave me a hug and whispered in my ear. "That girl loves you." She then walked away. I wasn't sure which girl she was talking about.
We got up to leave and of course Sheila had to hug the guys again. Olivia just looked at me. We got in the truck and I took the girls home. I told Sheila I would be leaving first thing in the morning and would probably return Sunday night. We kissed and I headed for home, to get a little sleep before leaving early the next morning.
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Chapter 3 will be posted soon.
Thank you for reading my story
Comments are welcome and appreciated
DG Hear
- COMMENTS
26thNCabout 3 years agoReading again, introducing new characters who might not be promiscuous. As in Olivia.
26thNCover 5 years agoRandy seems to be heading for Oliviaà. Sheila is going to cheat. Carlos is going to get his ads kicked and it's still a fun story.
krosis666over 9 years agoObviously he is in love with Olivia, and she with him. He doesn't trust Sheila, and she is a slut that he knows will give it up to anyone. They have nothing to tie them together, so why ARE they together? Why all the complication? Obviously he and Olivia will end up together, so why all the bullshit in between? Hell, they aren't even married, and have no kids, so what exactly is the point? Six chapters of this? Six lines would suffice! When you said that there were going to be twists, I thought you meant that this was going to be your first story that wasn't completely predictable!
cliffhanger20about 11 years agoGives a good discription of what really happens in bars like that. Been there done that. Good story so far.
estragonabout 12 years agoThis story is written as first-person narration. One of the hardest tasks a copy editor faces in a FPN story is to remember that the narrator is not an English teacher (except in the rare case when s/he is an English teacher, and DG Hear, MFG, doesn't write that kind of story).
This narrator does not speak grammatically, and is certainly not an English teacher. He's a biker who works in a blue-collar job. The story would ring so false that you would stop reading it the first time Randy spoke like an English teacher. And so would everybody else, even assuming DG Hear, MFG, let me do such obvious violence to his story.
