All Comments on 'Sister's Home Movies'

This is the 4th time I read it. Stroking it.

Five stars and nothing else needs said.

Your characters are amazing and your descriptive sex scenes are incredibly hot! Keep up the good work...

I don't even like incest stories but this one is 5 stars plus.

It made me think back to my time when I was in Vietnam wishing I had someone at home that would have done this for me

that was a great story .. keep writing about you and sis pleaseeeee !!!!!!!!!

What can I say loved the story you get a 10. Lets have more

....and it hasn't lost anything since I read it for the first time.

On very hot and horny story.

Sadly for me, parts two and three did not live up to this first instalment, but in saying that it takes nothing away from this chapter. I really enjoyed this !

Thanks for a great read !

Loved the story .. A fantasy come true for many, myself included. It got me excited many times...Thx

Get a sock place over your dick. It works as a lube as well as a clean up. Then drop it in the laundry.

While I was read this story the TV was on and Hillary Clinton was being anal and I typed in Hillary Clinton anal and found out she has the moral's of a ally cat. I got a eye full. She will want young black interns for her term.

Best story I have read by a male author! I rate it 6 stars!

bill.......5 of course

I did figure our that her "husband" was getting her to do this for himself, probably to soothe his conscience about his "exploits" wherever he was. His "little" brother-in-law was a far better man.

Would have given 7 stars if I could.

even tho I could see where this was going, the author took his time and made it very interesting and erotic reading. thanks and write more.

Great story, brilliantly written, drew me right into the action!

At one stage, I was wondering if she was actually sending the videos to hubby; or was she sending the 'replies from Mark' herself, just so she could develop the scenario and eventually get Ronnie into her bed ?

Reread again! 5*+ again! This still seems to me the bestest story on this site - at least of those I've read. I have to wonder about Mark's real motives in wanting his wife to have sex with her brother, but I'm all for it! As is she..., and he, of course! samslam might think about having a Homecoming story, and I'll let him decide how it should develop. I have my own ideas, of course.

Limogesguy has a good point, it never occurred to me that his sister might be behind the whole thing! Feining ignorance of how to edit files, emails from her "husband", it may not be that but interesting idea for sure. Great story, nice buildup, loved it.

Just WOW. 2018 and people are still adding comments. You rock. I'll read more/all of your stories... I can only hope I got an average one from you :-) 6 stars if I could!

Excellent writing. I found myself caring about the all-too- real characters, their hopes & fears, frustrations and joys.

This rates 5++! This is a beautifully written story but HOT at the same time. Realism is important in fantasy. The build up before actual sex was great such as playing video games, Maryanne getting in bed with him and the picnic scene. Just made it more real and erotic. The concept of Maryanne and Ron "keeping it even" was an excellent idea as was Ron showing concern for Maryanne's privacy. This story to me is like a good action packed movie in that i picked up something that I missed when I read it the first time, 2nd time, etc. I had to remind myself that this is fiction. Or... Is it? Given the circumstances (lonely, horny wife), I can see a brother and sister who are already emotionally close getting even closer. I have not read chapters 2 and 3 yet but I hope they are as good.

bern1965(pending).

I must show my "friend" this story, we may have to start all over again, could not stop reading until it was finished, hope there is more to come

There wasn't a single part I didn't like about this story. 5*+

Not sure if I want to read the other parts because I am anxious I might not like what happens next.

Makes me cum every time.

I can honestly say that in more that 20 years of reading these stories, this is the best so far.

This is a work of art. Loved it.

That was an amazingly hot story. Kept me hard the entire time

Nussin Rachel siskon pillua paljaalla.

Well, after reading this story 5 or six times I feel fully qualified to say it will be a long time before I read anything as hot! Awesome writing! Well done!

Soooo hot, great build-up for each session - very believable!!! Keep writting!

Your writing skills are obvious!! Keep up the good work!!!

I do enjoy your writing. This is my favorite story of yours so far.

Fabulous story, very erotic and entertaining. As a military couple we could really see ourselves in these roles. Hope there is a sequel.

That was fucking HOT!

Man, that is one of the best stories on Literotica. Masterful pacing; skillful character development. I'm now going to check to see if you've written a sequel!!!

She tells Geek there’s no evidence but are they forgetting the ones they’ve already sent ? Especially the ‘ virtual fuck ‘ video that clearly shows the fact she’s being penetrated , albeit by a vibrator , but a vibrator under her brothers controlling hand ! On the other hand , I absolutely loved it. I was going to say “ I rest my case your honor “ , but after that last sentence , the jury is still out ! Great story!

That story was incredible. One of the best I've read.

With photo's or video's before deployment or even photos sent to her, her GEEK brother should have address her 'imaginary' lover in 'first person' as if speaking to him in a dream. 'What a great surprise.' or 'I know this is a dream but it feels so real, I love you Mark, this is the best wet dream I've ever had! It feels so real! Ah, you taste so good! Please come to me every night in my dreams. (etc., etc., etc.,).

Fantastic!

"Sister's Home Movies:" - I've read a couple of 'samslam' stories, but my first time reading this story. Thank goodness I was not married during my military tour of four and half (4.5) years; however I had a two (2) year younger sister that was not a virgin when she became a teenager..

This story is like the best movie shown in the very best environment, such as surround sound, mood music, vibrating chairs, life-like hands that masturbate you.....this story took me to another world where I was immersed in nothing but the Glory of this story, this loving sibling couple living their lives as if no other person existed in their world!! The story exudes love, respect, honor, always satisfying their partner before anything else, and it gives an aura of their actions taking place just under the surface of a beautiful body of water where breathing is not an issue. It's awesome. Being a male i"m reluctant to publicly say this but I'm in love with the characters, twenty-two (22) year old sister, Maryanne and eighteen (18) year old brother Ronnie (aka "Geek" to his sister). The theme is unique, the characters are exceptional in their roles, the dialogue is smooth as silk, and the story is produced with hardly without any errors of significance. Accolades.....and every reader of 'samslam' should stand and salute him. You've done yourself proud!!!

(9/13/2021) Nicely done, this story is quite the erotic read, and there's a second chapter too. I can't stop thinking that maybe the person at the other end of the email thread may not be Mark. If it is then the man has become a cuckold; which in my eyes is not a good thing. Also, what will their parents think of her request? Will they become suspicious? Chapter 2 should tell. 5 stars of course!

Great read, will read second chapter now. Thanks for your good work.

this is simply beyond words....

i had read it before but it is incredibly captivating, almost real and i feel very spent with joy and lust....

wow!

Superb premise.

Superb story.

Sex has just right of amount or reluctance. Nice progression,

Five stars.

Such a great story: plot line, characters — everything!

Incredible story. Great description, great pacing, great dialogue and most importantly, extremely believable.

One of the best stories I’ve read on here. Hot as hell!!!

Great idea, description and plot.

Excellent story and very well written.

excellent

WOW! Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

Possibly the most arousing story on Literotica. This is my third reading in the last 9 months. I keep an erection from the time Maryanne catches Ronnie masturbating through the last page. Hot! Hot! Hot!

Thank you for your work.

Very exciting story, a loving brother helping his loving sister with a problem and receiving her help with his own. I enjoyed this piece very much. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Excellent .... very well written and paced. Lo ed it. 10/10

Great story

Great story! Extremely well written and very erotic! My very favorite.

WOW!!

It was good, but too long.

Still in my tip five. Many many thanks. I doubt you'll ever write anything as good again. . . It hits all the right areas for me. Best of luck trying. You write and I'll read. Thanks again.

Nice! Looking forward to reading PT II.

Great premise.

Great story!

Five stars in every way.

Hot! Well written and a good story. One thing I noticed was the word "grinded" that's not American I believe the Brits use it but In USA the correct word is ground. Overall this was a good story of moderate length shows that the author has talent and doesn't just whip out a 2 pager thinking that's all a story should be. Keep entertaining us with more stories like this and your following will increase even more. Anony Mous

Oh my god I wish that I had a sister🦸🏿‍♀️🫸🏽😧😧🤪😜😝🥰😘

Loved it love incest stories me and my sister used to fool around,licking sucking wore her panties did not have full sex still would love it today with her you opened up some beautiful memories keep up these love stories

Great story and excellent writing. I love how you juxtaposed the writer's (Geek's) thoughts with what he says. And you took the time to let the whole thing evolve. Very erotic. One thing I don't understand, and it's common among writers here, is the aversion to the woman's period. There's nothing better than fucking while a woman is menstruating - it's so wet and the scent is divine. My wife was using the diaphragm for birth control, so period week was the best: no diaphragm and the luscious excretions of her womb. Wonderful memories.

This was a very sexy, sweet story. Thanks for sharing!

At the beginning the story was a bit slow and boring and then it gradually picked up by the time the story ended it was a good story even a great story so overall I'll still gave it a 5✨s rating

🙊🙉🙈💨🤔😬

Five stars!!! A great story and well told. She had pussy hair. Blond pussy hair. An easy five rating because her pussy was hairy!!!!!!!!

Brought back so many happy memories

Some how I started thinking about my own life and being forced to register for the draft when I was 18 . This was more than a sexy story for me I was born in 1954 . My first year my number was 360 something only the people who were 1-50 were at risk of being called up . The second year my number was 14 . Thank God I was in college and had a college deferment so the sex in the late 1960’s was fun but the fear of being forced into the war and being possibly killed or mamed wasn't.

5*s++ Nice build-up and beautiful love story. How could he last that long? WOW.

LeB