All Comments on 'Steam Room Daddy'

Hope you keep writing. Loved the story and the slow descent into domination. I am not into pain, so glad it was more or less consentual. See you at the gym.

I loved your story. I belong to the Y and this is pretty close to my fantasy. Just can't find a guy to take control of me. :) I hope you keep writing.

Btw, also agree with "anonymous" that it would be extremely erotic to have him manipulate/forceably take the girlfriend too!

Love the step by step domination as described by the person being drawn into this world. Have similar fantasies of being seduced/taken in a similar manner. One time a guy was fondling me when I was in a theater..but at the time was young and scared and ran away...often times I fantasize what would have happened if I stayed there and let him fondle and touch me..

Nice story..hope you continue!

From hetero to bi (or, perhaps, now firmly gay because we won't know until you write the next chapter), this well-told story moves along convincingly as Todd us swept into the role of a cum-loving boitoy. As for Erin, I hope that somehow she gets back into the tale in a domineering role. Her demand that Todd keep going to the Y portends this approach. I gave your work a 5. Now you give us more!

Very nice, seemed real enough,love the domination, need more.

I loved that story. It was really hot. Maybe because I want to be bred and owned like that. My hat's off to you.

Loved the protagonist, just up my street.

the whole reason the boy doesn't fight back is because deep down he wants it. he just hasn't admitted it yet

Hope the girl friend comes back to get fucked too, very hot ending.

Loved the story, let's have more please - or do I have to make you?

it was good but i didnt really like it. the whole ending is what was kinda messed up and the whole thing of him not fighting back or standing up for himself or even saying no was what made it unbelievable. just saying but anyways you have the right idea and you should deff keep writing stories. you seem like the kind of person that likes rape stories and you should try writing them instead of writing about someones life like this story. but anyways good luck and hope to get more stories from you. :)

I had a hard time getting into this story -- it just wasn't very believable to me. I couldn't relate to your protagonist. He was just a wimp. And your 'Daddy' was gross; old and fat! Each to his own I guess. Looks like quite a few people did enjoy this story.

I hope you will continue with more themes like this one...

Unbelievable!!!! So hot and brought back some similar memories about being introduced into gay/bi life

Love it !!! More more i was hoping his girlfriend like to watch her man get fuck and suck cock.

more more more !!!