by silkstockingslover
Any chance there could be a sequel? I liked the original ending more than the alternate. The whole story was written well, so easy to visualize
The alternate ending made for an interesting twist but I liked the lesbian version best. Both endings work on a well told story! Loved the final note of the blindfold and trust. I can imagine myself in her position as she hears the knock on the door! Anticipation is a turn on for me so the unknown is overwhelming!
I liked the original ending more than the alternate. Loved the blind fold in the alternate ending.
I am hoping for a sequel?
I enjoyed the ending where Lily said WOOF. Rather than MEOW. Will there be anymore of this story???
5🌟's
Either ending works for me, I get off easily with most good sex stories. An d this was a good story...!
I find the first ending much better, with the all lesbian theme being more exciting!.
Wow just wow, generally I can’t get off on stories but both ending were so amazing I came to both.
I truly appreciated your second ending. I didn’t see it coming until the bulge in the panties. Then I was like duh. But it still was the best. I’m really excited about the next section. A knock at the door and voices plural. Oh my goodness to be her. I’m jealous. Keep up the excellent writing that you do. Happy in California.
The first ending was the best. Both good but the possibilities seem more with the first.
You do such an excellent job of describing sex between a she-male and a woman or man( your 2018 story). Looking forward to more between Lily and Mistress Katherine!
Think s is a tremendous piece, thank you very much. As she males aren’t my thing, I prefer the first ending. But I will admit the story was so good I read the second and it was hot.
S always 5 stars
I'll pass on what's in the box
Same with what's behind the curtain
I want to see what's coming through door #3
You write so well that I can't choose. You'll have to choose for me Mistress.GQ2BvR
hermaphrodite. Then Lily could have had the best of both worlds. Great story even though I knew what the alternate was as son as you told us you had one. None the less, a great story! 5*
I liked the first ending better. And the epilogue. I do want to see a follow-up of her moving in with her mistress.
I loved it. I especially liked the second ending. I did not you skipping her first anal, that would have been so hot
I enjoyed the first ending more, but thought both endings worked well. Of course I prefer your writings about “pure” lesbians to those about “shemales” so factor that in. I did find the second ending more fun than I thought I might. Thank you for all your imagination and creativity!
I liked both endings as well but i don’t think they should end at that point. There is to much potential in them not to carry on. Jasmin Please try to take them further when you can. K london
Would have given first ending a 5 but alternate version as disappointing 😞
The Story was Vey Good: Having Two Endings is a good 'Innovation'. The Illustrated version Must Have been Stupendous. Submitted by Tijna
i loved it all. The seduction - the torment, beautiful.
I also love both endings - what a surprise the T-Girl was, fabulous idea.
Liked just Mrs. Parks better as a real Woman. would have liked to hear about their first "business" trip and perhaps using her to seal a business deal with 2 Partners of a new firm.
I loved both endings, but the second one was far more titillating and full of dripping lust! Now you obviously know that this can run and run! So I hope you will carry on with this story line, as it has endless spin-offs! Pretty please?
Amazing! I love it when a cunt can write such a dirty fantasy story. I wonder how close you came to actually being that Mistress? I liked the cunt ending. More erotic.
Fabulous - I loved the first ending very much, didn't see the twist coming and it was awesome. very close decision probably the 2nd just wins, but maybe you could continue with both endings.
First one was kinky enough for me! Second one- overkill. Overall great story!
I loved the first part for the dom/sub sex, but would like it to be me sucking and being fucked by that beautiful 9” cock!
preference for the second ending as the epilogue leaves opportunities for more
Jazzy... loved the stories! I like them even better when illustrated like you frequently do
I wonder how many times you got yourself off while writing this wholly incomplete tale of submissive lust. I originally had the impression that our heroine was not experienced in sex, but you quickly altered that view. Hard for me to believe that she, being quite the whore, could throw those pleasures away so quickly, so if I had to choose I guess I would choose the second ending. I’m anxious for the rest of the story especially with the husband. You have an excellent imagination! Thanks.
Liked the second ending better, though the first was good. The only. way to have made it better was with your illustrations
both endings were hot AF !!! i didnt seen the last ending at all but it was hot hot hot, what about the hubby though ??? hope there is more to this, also 5*
I'm speechless - with pleasure! ALL great endings. Just when I thought we were done with the stap-on (always a winner for me!), Finding that she's packing a 9" member, sent me to the next level (yes, another of my perversions!). And you really left my on the edge of my seat - not only blindfolded, and I'm hopeful the voiced belong to several ladies with toys or other goodies?!
Sidenote - I've been a long time fan of reading erotica (nonono69 was/is one of my favorite authors who's subject matter still sends me to the stratosphere), back to the BBS days with no bandwidth or for that matter, hour-long downloads for one photo. I like something left to my imagination that starts with you painting the picture. To that end, your are one of three authors I follow - wonderful work and keep letting your imagination loose!
Both endings were great. Although I much preferred the first. The delayed gratification and teasing made it so much hotter.
My choice goes to the second part. Surrly becausrcas a crossdresser, i like pleasuring cocks
They’re both wonderful. I think the pet’s character is realized more with the lesbian version. Although the shemale version might lead to the pet being bred over and over again with her boss or for alliances
It was great. Both were good, but I liked the first ending better. I also liked the epilogue. Very hot story. Being a submissive male slut myself, I love stories of submission. Especially your stories.
I loved the surprise of the second ending. If anything I would have liked it drawn out a bit more. The addition of Miss Katherine in the epilogue is very promising
Oh, what a glorious trading Lily had…which ended with miracle sex and complete submission.
Great story..loved every minute of it.
I need more…more ..more!
Thanks
Great story and you should take her on a a trip so she could be under the boardroom table servicing your clients while you have your meeting sucking their cocks and cunts and yours as well. Great for new clients.
yours truly, Joe
Both were superbly told and enjoyable. But, as you are asking if i did have a preference, i do. The F/F version.