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We haven't decided where yet. She'd like to see Port Moresby, so we'll probably start for there. If the weather holds, we'll make the Coral Sea Islands in a couple of weeks and Port Moresby a couple of weeks later. We're in no hurry. We have forever.
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Smugglerjim14 days agoI married at 38 the plan was work till 55 and then sail the 7 seas.. Seems my dream was not to be when my wife presented me with a son ..... There's a story there. It destroyed my trust and left me now at 69 years of age with not having fulfilled the dream I had. So I've learnt if you have a dream pursue it .. Looking back with regret is shite..
I wish the happy sailers fun on the ocean.
Falstaff6025 days agoGreat short story. Love stories that feature the outdoors whether it's fishing, hunting, cabins, canoes or sailing.
Anonymousabout 1 month agoAs another anonymous said, it’s fine. People notice errors where they don’t matter.
5*
Tc
SouthPacificabout 1 month agoNice little story but, as someone who lives in Auckland, your geography is a bit out. As allansbullet wrote, if you're arriving from the north Auckland's harbour is on the starboard side, and you wouldn't go anywhere near Motuihe Island (which would be to port, anyway).
Heading back out, there's no way a yacht travelling at maybe 8 or 10 knots is going to get from Auckland city in the morning to between the Barrier Islands by lunchtime. As for finding an airport for Estelle, why not divert to Whangarei? It's on the route to Norfolk Island anyway, and it means that you don't have to worry about little details like passports.
All that nit-picking aside, I like the story just as much as dozens of others that you've written. Keep up the good work!
Rasmatabout 1 month agoMan! Talk about a change of venue! From Central and Eastern Tennessee to the far South Pacific. Wow, Go Big or Go Home, I guess.
I much prefer longer stories (I liken it to ONE potato chip), but this LITTLE gem managed to uphold the high standards we've grown to expect from this writer.
Thank you, RONDE.
Anonymousabout 1 month agoMy people get caught up with with issues that really don't bother.
Is just a story for heavens sake, not fact.
SexySenior56about 1 month agoNice, but could have been so much more. Even if Estelle happened to have her passport in her purse, there needs to be more to her back story. No one called the cops after she disappeared? Wasn't;t her sister concerned? On the up side, you've left it wide open for a chapter 2 or even a prequel.
