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David is the most beta male MC I have ever read in this site. The guy's a disappointment. How can he even forgive these women immediately as soon they say sorry. These women cheated on him when they were together and when they asked to be forgiven and promised to never cheat again, doesn't change the fact that they CHEATED! He shouldn't have got together with them again. These sluts doesn't deserve him. He should've punished them by pretending they were a stanger now and have nothing to do with him. He should've cut them off completely, not give them the satisfaction to be forgiven and the chance to be intimate with him again.

I wasn't too sure about this to begin with because of the bashing of both genders, but it's well written enough that I had to keep going to see where it led. Amanda really made the story work, definitely the MVP here. Once she was introduced everything started to fall into place and I was really hooked. Five stars, I hope there is a part 2 and that David gets himself a little harem. Would be nice to see some character development with Carla after some therapy with Amanda. I hope Eddy is able to come out to his family and move in with Brian

I hope you continue this, wouldn't mind seeing other people from David's past emerge and continue making his life a train wreck.

I think David and Gina should be exclusive, Because bro/sis love is the most pure love in existence.

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Ass and g-spot

Wow, I didn't know what I was getting in to and am blown away. The complicated characters and foreshadowing are way more compelling than the normal stuff on this site and I love the change of pace.

Being honest, I think a big reason I'm a fan of this genre is some of the feelings David expresses - feeling stressed and trapped, and wouldn't it be nice if there was actually someone by your side all along who understood and connected and cared. So even though the actual incest only happened at the end of the story, the whole thing satisfied a similar itch.

I completely agree with Ranethekin that I'm always rooting for the sister, ideally knocked up repeatedly. It says something about how deeply she cares.

While I would like to read a continuation, I think it could also almost end here quite nicely -- an epilogue that ensures everyone has a happy ending would be enough.

Some other feedback - I was surprised by the Too Long Didn't Read interlude on page 14; it felt like you ran out of motivation there and just wanted to wrap things up. Another option would be to flesh the last few pages out.

The only big issue I have is with Carla - I didn't like her initial portrayal as a manipulative asshole, I didn't find her hot-cold willingness to sleep with David sensible, and I thought her meek acceptance of Gwen's storming out was inexplicable.

I vote for A after C and G because I think it would be unfair to the other characters if David and Gina just disappear. C seems more plausible to me than G, though based on this story I think you might be able to pull off G and the kids does appeal.

Anyway, fantastic job and I'm going to have to check out your other work now.

Awesome read. I am not sure which one I want but it definitely needs to have more Gina and maybe Gwen as well with a little of Amanda.

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Ass highest, then cum, the g-spot. Whatever happens I do always think in bro/sis stories the sibling pair should always see each other as their #1. And anyone else as just sometimes fun or in the case of threesomes then a triad. Whatever happens though, Davis needs to knock that sister up. Multiple times. lol