All Comments on 'Take Out the Trash'

Hi Randi.

At least a five star. Fast paced and full of humor as well.

Thank God, there are still men with spine, will and determination. Thanks for the closure outline in the last paragraph of the story. I would have liked to know what happened to the two kids, to Marci and her husband and if they are still working at the same place?

BJ

Liked it a bit more the second read.

This one deserves at least a hundred stars. Had me laughing all the way through; that dumb-ass wife of his, really a piece of art.

Must have missed this first time out, glad I caught up, put a smile on my face.

"Allen and Marci die tomorrow" OMG, that line made me laugh so hard. It would also be a great title to a movie.

How do you do it BlackRandi1958?! This one is fabulously hilarious!! Your stories are ALL so entertaining. As usual, 5*s.

LMAO!!! That was great. Thanks.

⭐⭐⭐⭐

Damn, this story was fun

Good story but too short.

clever. do some more.

As always, Randi scores. A quick 5. Hell, it's a QuickMagazine 5! And a sterling example of how you do the one page thing. And, atypical for BR, no slang. But, typical for BR, great writing, and a superb last paragraph.

This is the first of your stories I have read. It was an outstanding read.

I have seen your name as helping many of my favorite writers with their stories. Thanks for all of your writing as well as helping others improve theirs

Keep writing

JH4Fun

A quick fun read. An earlier explanation might have helped, but since I’ve read so many of these stories I caught on quickly.

Bill S.

Cute short story but no real substance due to being so short.

Bill S.

Like the story. AAAA+++

5 stars - cute story

Chuck is funny. Charles is just unhappy.

That was fun. More, more!!!

Light-hearted justice for a Femdom agitprop cheater. Many good one-liners.

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Short und Dulce!

11/10!!!!!

Fun story, although the ending was abrupt and incomplete.

Fun, needs more... thank you.

I do wish you would write some more.

Nice one.

This is one of those stories that needs a way to add bonus stars to the ratings system. I'd give it at least 6-7 stars if I could. Thanks for the very entertaining story!

Fun! I like it!

This is some of the greatest dialogue ever. I to wish to read more of the legend of Chuck. Long live the Chuckster!

"I was also under the impression that Allen was male. Does anyone else know he's non-cisgendered?"

=====> Hilarious!

Yes some funny lines. The crack about Allen being noncisgendered was riotiously funny lol.

Sardonic. Being tongue lashed by a manipulative holier-than-thou hypocritical narcissist. (Waiting for the other shoe to drop?)