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Click here"The one with the art-deco glass door?"
"That's the one."
"Oh, I love that place. Yes! Let's meet there, tomorrow at eight."
"Perfect!" he said. Then he laughed. "I guess I should tell you my real name, then."
She thought for a second, then she told him: "Wait until we meet. It will have more power then."
There was silence on the other end for a moment, then: "As you wish. I'll see you tomorrow, then."
She waited outside the restaurant, wearing her red dress and light blue scarf under her Burberry coat. A tall red-haired man, clean-cut and smiling, in a forest green jacket and black leather gloves, approached. She recognized his smile, and smiled back.
"Margaret McCullough," she said, extending a hand.
He took her hand gently. "Jared Davies." With his other hand, he gestured to the door. "Shall we?"
She nodded, and he opened the door for her. And she did not hesitate to step through it.
~ FIN ~
THIS story gets it. Breathtaking and enlightening. Thank you writer.
Oh, Jared, where are you? You know Margaret/Miranda are not the only ones who want to be ravished.
Every time I read it. Fortunate Margaret and fascinating Jared.
This is one of the strongest 'Female Driven' stories I have ever read Online. It is easily a Quintuple 5 Star winner.
Fantastic "coming of age" story. Beautifully written. Not overly erotic, but full of sensual feelings.
Passion AND romance. One of the best I've read. A shame there is only one other story.
Normally stories of domination and punishment hold no attraction for me, but this story of domination really held me, possibly more to see the outcome than anything else. In the end I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank-you.
A wonderful exploration of the erotic, long enough to develop a sympathetic heroine and engagement in her quest.
Thank you very much for sharing your story.
This is what I would call a first class example of an erotic story. Sexy without attempting to catalogue in detail every sexual act known to man. Congratulations!
this was just simply beautiful i felt like i was ravished myself i just ask that we get a story with the neice
Excellent storing, writing, imagination. My fantasy exactly. Thank you.
this is the first time I've enjoyed a story enough to comment on it, please write more!!! This is so much like my own fantasies except that I like guys with long dark hair not short red!!!
That was a brilliant story. You explained your ideas with such detail and understanding and put into words some of my own conflicts. I also loved the poetry. Thank you sharing.
This was an inspired story. I learned a lot about a special type of kink that I did not know much about and her own struggles to deal with it explained it so much the better. You are a gifted writer
Thank you for the experience. The intoxication of your words, imagination and realism were scrumptious. I look forward to reading your work in the future.
SM