Taken

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"The one with the art-deco glass door?"

"That's the one."

"Oh, I love that place. Yes! Let's meet there, tomorrow at eight."

"Perfect!" he said. Then he laughed. "I guess I should tell you my real name, then."

She thought for a second, then she told him: "Wait until we meet. It will have more power then."

There was silence on the other end for a moment, then: "As you wish. I'll see you tomorrow, then."

She waited outside the restaurant, wearing her red dress and light blue scarf under her Burberry coat. A tall red-haired man, clean-cut and smiling, in a forest green jacket and black leather gloves, approached. She recognized his smile, and smiled back.

"Margaret McCullough," she said, extending a hand.

He took her hand gently. "Jared Davies." With his other hand, he gestured to the door. "Shall we?"

She nodded, and he opened the door for her. And she did not hesitate to step through it.

~ FIN ~

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TalkSexyToMe2029TalkSexyToMe2029over 2 years ago

THIS story gets it. Breathtaking and enlightening. Thank you writer.

nthusiasticnthusiasticalmost 5 years ago

Oh, Jared, where are you? You know Margaret/Miranda are not the only ones who want to be ravished.

nthusiasticnthusiasticover 5 years ago
Love It More . . .

Every time I read it. Fortunate Margaret and fascinating Jared.

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10over 6 years ago
LIFE, LONGING, LUST, & LANGUAGE

This is one of the strongest 'Female Driven' stories I have ever read Online. It is easily a Quintuple 5 Star winner.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Fantastic "coming of age" story. Beautifully written. Not overly erotic, but full of sensual feelings.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Wow!

Passion AND romance. One of the best I've read. A shame there is only one other story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Normally stories of domination and punishment hold no attraction for me, but this story of domination really held me, possibly more to see the outcome than anything else. In the end I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank-you.

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
And it ended as a romance!

A wonderful exploration of the erotic, long enough to develop a sympathetic heroine and engagement in her quest.

Thank you very much for sharing your story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

This is what I would call a first class example of an erotic story. Sexy without attempting to catalogue in detail every sexual act known to man. Congratulations!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
simply beautiful

this was just simply beautiful i felt like i was ravished myself i just ask that we get a story with the neice

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