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"I would love it. Truly."
"Me to. It would make me so happy." Abby said.
Bella sort of hunched up shyly and nodded her head vigorously with a massive smile on her face.
"What about you mum?" Ann asked.
"Well I don't know about having any more babies but I haven't felt so loved and enjoyed sex so much for many years and I would hate to lose it."
I was dumbfounded. "Really? All of you?"
"Can you manage all of us?" Abby asked with a laugh. Knowing I already had.
The upshot is that I sold my online business and invested in a new online shop. Bought a new house out in the countryside big enough for us all to live in and once the babies started coming we brought grandma in to be the childminder as she had been a paediatric nurse for many years. She wasn't involved in the sex of course but she was fully aware of the way we lived and approved. I had sex with one or more of the women at least three times a day. But never in work time. Mind you a quick fuck in our lunch break was always welcome.
Mum ran the house making sure we all got up and went to work. Which was in a wing of the house and we all worked the business. Not surprisingly Bella was first to give birth to a baby girl then, more surprisingly mum had a boy. Then a couple of months later Ann a girl, then Abbey to a boy. We are now four years into our life and planning to enlarge the family now that the business is on a secure footing. Life is bliss.
- COMMENTS
maughamy_issuesabout 1 year agothrough...threw your...you're its...it's
Pronouns without antecedents, continuity, punctuation, quotation marks
If you expect readers, much less good reviews, to say nothing about payment, it's up to you to write readability
I'm well aware you've done nothing to this...work...in five years, but I never lose hope, I will revisit next year...I'll deliver a rating then
Anonymousover 1 year agoGood job Micro keep up this story ....as in and then what? Can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Anonymousover 1 year agoSophomoric at best. One run-on sentence after another and a total waste of time.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI'm a strong believer that rape is inexcusable. You start out incenuenting that is the direction of the story but use it one time as a way to get what you want so to speak. You can take control without rape which is evident in master/slave relationships. The story needs more content to make more realistic. The way you wrote this is reminiscent of most people's first time, wham, bam, thank you ma'am. There's no build up. Just straight to the point as if all sex is a rush job. This story could be a lot better and more realistic if more thought was put into writing the story.
Anonymousalmost 6 years ago1*
Try writing a built up first before jumping straight into the sex. The story had a lot of potential but sadly very lacking compered to over similar themed stories on this site where the son takes control. Compered to them this is a -5*.
I had to force myself to read past the first four paragraphs and sadly it just went down hill from start to finish.
Hamsteralmost 6 years agoRape is not in any way, shape or form OK. And then Mom is just fine with what sonny just did. This could be under Sci-Fi/Fantasy and it would not be any more believable. Garbage.
