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Click here'Is it sodomy if a doctor fingers your prostate?' Karen reasoned.
'No.'
'And did you at least enjoy it?' she asked. It was important not to shatter him. She might have taught him a lesson but she worried now that maybe she had made him more vulnerable in other ways.
'Yeah, I'd do it again.' And that was when his mother laughed. And she laughed hard.
'Then you did something right,' she smiled. 'Now get the fuck out of my room and go bust your nut. Mom's got to go mom and stuff...'
- COMMENTS
Oseeker7 months agoMom was so gentle with her son.....'Go ahead, stick it in!'
And with a condom no less.
1 star
POS
Foxterot7aalmost 3 years agoA adequate story; however, I would have like to have had the background more developed. For example, what brought the situation to the mother's attention? What had the son done or not done for the mother to think there was a problem? From the son's point of view, what did he think was a problem? I think the mother may be a little bit aggressive and superimposing her needs on her son.
constantlyhardover 7 years agoThis is a great read! I like your storytelling style, the delicious sexy vocabulary you use, the visualization, and the level of realism the story has. Hope to see more about Karen and Michael. Just amazingly delicious!
PanzerFeckalmost 8 years agoAuthorMuch appreciated and I'm glad you're enjoying the show so far. I'd just like to clear some things up for those of you needing clarity or having opinions that seem to affect your ratings.
1.) I wrote this after reading a lot of stories on the subject, both real and fictional. It depends on what you want. I'm at ease with the fact that I can't please everybody or give them specifically what they want. That doesn't make me want to try harder.
2.) Realism vs Suspension of Disbelief - would prevent me from ever writing fiction. I see many unbelievable stories rated highly and I don't begrudge them. If they're written well then they deserve the rating. However if the complaint is that I don't write realistically enough, then all I can do is practice, but I'll never promise to go in the direction that's expected of me. All I can hint is that you may be pleasantly surprised, so please keep reading. I don't judge or begrudge, though, so at least thanks for giving me a try to begin with if you don't continue.
3.) I don't ever believe that a story has to have a "happy ending" in any respect. My main priority is giving characters something to work with and that sometimes involves giving them the time to come to terms. It's not my place to be predictable. It is my place to step back and to think where this story goes. Sometimes we don't get what we want. That goes for my characters too sometimes.
Finally:
"Finish the story" - I fully intend to and had written it in a way I think you will agree with. Still not finished though. This mother and son aren't going to be a flash in the pan.
"No more condoms" - I also fully agree. Hope you enjoy chapter 2. The way the world is today though, condoms are a must until you know you have a trustworthy partner. That's what Michael's mum was trying to teach him, despite the fact that she knows, like all adult human beings, that bareback/raw is the best and the only way we want sex to be.
Thanks again.
charliebillalmost 8 years agoThis was a great, sexy story. BUT. She had really wanted him bareback. He wanted to know how bareback felt. So DO IT! Next story that way plz.
thecarolinadreameralmost 8 years agoYou have a good start, but to have them break off at that point is too much. We wouldn't believe it even if it was true.
Withholding score pending where you take this.
PanzerFeckalmost 8 years agoAuthorNote that the title says Ch. 01. I'm not gonna write about tea and crumpets lol
horny2doitalmost 8 years agoA very nice story But now she will be running this through her mind over and over; since its been way to long as she out it. So in another chapter; maybe Mike and his Mom should finish what they started !! It's not realistic to leave him that way nor his Mom either. They should get back together and screw each other with all the bells and whistles; soft and hard and fast and slow but finish off like it should be. Deep, strong strokes and let it go. I think his Mom would be proud he does it so she can realize how she left him wasn't fair either; since that was part of her "lesson". Who knows, maybe she'll want him to help her out off and on so they both enjoy it and she feels better after an obviously long dry spell. She can tutor him on how he acts, what he says and how he treats a woman. Thanks !
