Taking the Long Shot Ch. 01-02

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Professor Fox gave me his business card and asked me to call him if I changed my mind. Doctor Lillian Skinner gave me a leaflet with details of her alcohol abuse clinic. Then they got up and left.

End of chapter 02

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15 Comments
tazz317tazz317over 7 years ago
THE SPOUSE IS ALWAYS THE 1ST SUSPECT

meanwhile the search is ongoing, TK U MLJ LV NV

rightbankrightbankover 8 years ago
start one way and then undo everything

build her personality, then tell us it is all false,

create him as a successful businessman, then collapse him in ruin

offer a reason for the aunt and uncle to dislike him, then shuffle in a new scenario about which he knew nothing.

surround him in an atmosphere of deception and distrust by the police and media, and then shove psychobabble into the mix.

too many red herrings for me.

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
AND THE MASSES CLAIM

this could never happen in our country. Famous last words. Bet Me!!! TK U MLJ LV NV

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 10 years ago
No Shit -

So how do we get him treated for his depression (that the good doctor failed to mention) and get his ass back in gear?

devildog26devildog26over 13 years ago
Willful Suspension of Disbelief

Really enjoyed part one of this story. The character development is well executed. We know a lot about Dan and an adequate amount about Cassandra. The baddies are there lurking in the background. I am looking forward to part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
More than a little sad

But still, a very good read. I wish I had half your talent and creativity.

bruce22bruce22about 15 years ago
Duh

Read carefully HIV, my reply is in the post, because it all ties into repressed memories and memory loss, and it was you that I was quoting, so the red herring came from your post.

Harryin VAHarryin VAabout 15 years ago
I get the impression Bruce22 is a MORON

Bruce22 not only ignored my comments/ point... about how anyone could get married without knowing the basic things about his woman/ wife but then Bruce22 goes on to Maker stuff up!

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I never commented AT all.. in ANYWAY of the momory loss stuff. that whole issue is a Red herring to MY view/ post.

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It is Most revealing that Bruce22 never makes a comment about the absurdity of marrying someone and not knowing they are weathly

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they were in a war zone

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they were ganged raped

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they were rescued

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and her father was kiled right in front of her.

bruce22bruce22about 15 years ago
Great story

but the comments can be even more interesting. Frequently Harry points out that the whole story is all ready up on SOL, so in this case his preview of things to come is probably memory... But thing that is most fascinating is his declaration "Cassie and Her supposed memory loss...".

I get the feeling the repressed memories, Freud, and amnesia are all on equal footing with the Easter Bunny and Santa Claus for Harry, and perhaps he does not believe anything that someone tells him, much less a female personagem in a story.

We love you Denham Forrest! Keep 'em comin'

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
OK

I don't care for Harry's style but he often makes a lot of sense.

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