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Click hereYeah, it's a tangled web of deceit out there in FaceBook Friends world, if you are even vaguely connected with someone who wants to get you by any means possible.
Be careful out there, folks, and be safe. If you've nothing to worry about, I'm sure you've nothing to worry about. But....
Don't buy the five years for simple assault when (a) no prior record and (b) where a broken marriage is involved. He woukd do no time in jail. Seriously. Some of the other stuff was creative but why play the hoax on his son? Complex.
Five years for simple assault? In Texas? If that were the case bar fights alone would fill the prisons. Simple assault is a misdemeanor carrying a maximum of 6 months. A first offense is not going to result in prison time or more than a suspended sentence and a fine. 5
This was a nice little story - clever, but you dropped the ball on the ending. Like you got bored with it.
This is probably happening everywhere, especially from our sainted politicians. Great story.
I've read a number of your stories now, mainly LW's, and I see real GENIUS in your story writing except for one issue. You assume the readers follow your logic or insights; you are not leading the readers in explaining the complexities of your characters. Hence, your readers are not connecting with your assumptions/logic/characters and the comments/ratings are suffering. Unless that is your own personal enjoyment as to see how far you can twist the readers, he he.
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My only suggesting is you define the depths of your characters to hand feed the readers. Thanks.
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5*, Hooyah, salute!
Not sure if the punishment fits the crime. One ass whipping is not enough!!!