All Comments on 'Tears of the Fallen Ch. 01'

I agree with another poster ...I would definitely buy these books

Oh my gosh! When I saw you had a new story out I thought "Cool, a new story to read!" And then when I saw Caleb and Annie's names I almost screamed out loud with shock and joy! So incredibley happy that you're continuing this series:) Keep 'em coming and don't make us wait too long

First off I want to say that I am in love with your stories and all of your characters. I only just found them and I have spent the last 4 days reading them all.

But...I'm confused about the whole "Anakatrine/Annie having a mother" thing. How does a vampire have a mother? And is Annie able to have babies too?

Also, I'm kind of getting annoyed with Caleb going all "how dare you defy me" like. I really hope he gets put in his place. I think that's the only thing that slighty annoys me about this series is that the males dont seem to ever get put in their place. The women just forgive them so easily.

Oh well I suppose. I still love and will keep reading the series :)

Your talent for writing is amazing. I happened to find your stories a few months ago, thank the gods, and haven't been able to stop reading them since. I've even, I admit, read them all more than once... Ok, more than twice... All right, all right, I've read through them at least three times.

I'm hoping Pietro finds his mate in one of the Hybrids. Perhaps Alexie and Cedar's daughter? He deserves a little happiness, don't you think?

Either way, I'm sure your stories will continue to enrapture me, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

When is the next part of the story? It's kinda almost been a month...

If I recall correctly, Mac and Demetri had killed many vampires in their past. Also there was a scene, where Caleb and Demetri with company kill vampires in the council. All those killings didn't create such a fuss, as turning a vampire back to mortal. I think there shouldn't be so much drama about it.

Here are my points:

1.I think mortality is lesser punishment than death.

2.Vampires have been killed in this story for smaller faults, than attacking children of the ancient.

3.You can always bite a human, turning him back to vampire.

Heck yes, good first chapter, and also awesome is that I'm like a whole two hours north of Toronto :) Jaz you are super duper awesome :) :)

On to chapter 2!

:)

Owk iam officially handing you the tittle of bests,badass and awesomest writer, WOWZA!!!!!!! :))

No, not Annie; but you Jaz. I had to look at my "cheat sheet" and go back to the last chapter of HOW to get re-acclimated. However I am now back on board. You are the master of this genre. Now on to the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!

If vampires can't have children, how were Anakatrine and Gard siblings....I can't believe I didn't catch this the first time through when we first met him! Although it seems that only the Vampire Queen can have children (somehow), does that mean that Annie can have kids too?!!?! Haha, getting ahead of myself. I just had to bring it up because it hit me like a slap in the face when Gard was talking about their mother, and again, I can't believe I've never thought of it before.

Also, I love 1.5 hours SW of Toronto, so that's pretty awesome!

I have finally had the time to catch up, and this is what you do to me, okay, I am bracing myself to move on to other chapters. 'Great!!!

Lady, I need to see all this made into a series, I'd buy the whole dvd series!

i'm so happy they're back :) you've made me laugh and cry in 2 pages...

Who votes for smacking Caleb upside of the head... Men geez!!! As Demetri said only he has the problem separating them no one else but I love these guys so I hope it all works out well in the end. I can't have sympathy for Reasa but what a punishment but I do feel for poor Liam... what do you have in store for us next I wonder

I would like to say yes men are idiots. We can't help it. We are programmed that way genetics caveman primal urges take your pick. We need a strong, kind, caring, and loving women who can put up with us and Gibbs slap us in the back of head for are own good.

I just cried five times. Two during this story and three during the ending of Lilly's story when She ran away.

Yup! Men are idiots at times! LOL. But I love your stories. You put so much emotion into your plot and characters that I have cried and laughed. Great work!

Patti

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...several years after the story ends.

But speaking of nagging thoughts.

The pistol Theressa used, still had several rounds in it. What happened to it after her capture? Who secured it and why wasn't it turned over to the antidote research team? Also her gear.

And if someone is hiding the weapon and the lone assassin's other gear, what is their motive?

A minor quibble, Thereassa's nails were painted with Vampire venom. When was that removed?

I really liked the world you created and the characters in it, but by the end of this story it kind of got... Predictable, it lost the suspense and drama because the male mates are 100% whipped and no one can do any wrong. It'd be nice to see relationships actually tested for longer than a chapter or two. But still a good read.

This chapter disappointed me a bit. I don't understand the fact that Gard and demetri say annie/anakatrine are the same person, but she was so broken by what she did to the girl and almost confused about what had happened. Anakatrine didn't discuss with her what would happen and then take over b/c she was strong enough to do it. she was given control by annie, that is clear, but it wasn't the souls of anakatrine and annie working together. Caleb, if he believes Annie is letting anakatrine take control, should be worried about Annie and see if the woman he loves is still there since his issue is oen day anakatrine will be all that is left.

if annie is still there after that move then ask her why she felt it necessary. don't they need to work on it together? Can he be sure word won't get out? If it does she'd be in danger and he's not around to care for her. Shouldn't he care where his mate is so he can protect her. Where is this male mate behavior in him now? the guy still is jealous of her brother touching her after 30 years together or whatever and he can turn that off on a dime. wierd.

Does even annie know what the repercussions are for liam and this girl?

Why has rafe not kicked caleb''s ass for hurting his 'baby girl' or not being a good mate?

who is working on seeing the hybrids are better understood and working on helping them?

why has no one questioned that chick before they were gonna kill her? Why not get all and any info from her. Would caleb have said 'off with her head' before trying to get info on who is making the amort and who is the enemy? really? they were mad she wasn't killed on the spot. that isn't sounding like a smart ruler or even a smart cop for god's sake.

The thing about Annie and anakatrine is that they are almost like a Were in that there are two souls inside of her. She achieved balance with her seeing her memories and sometimes relying on her strength. Annie knew she wouldn't be able to save Reasa so she let Anakatrine do it. She firmly believed that if Reasa was killed 3 souls would be lost.

As to her knowledge the only way they would get anything from a vampire especially a zealot would be incredibly long torture. I don't doubt Mac or Karn would have it in them to do it but that's not what their leadership stands for. They are all trying to do what's right and to do the exact same thing she did to Pietro is unconscionable.

As to Rare not taking off Caleb head it is because he basically went into Alpha mode. He came out of it to comfort Annie but any push on his part could have split them even further apart creating the civil war Anakatrine and Annie sacrificed so much to stop. That and he knows deep down the other lyrics place Annie is safer than being with Caleb is with Gard even if he doesn't like it.

just a thought, could Elijah be the mystery leader in Europe?

Elijah= The Big Bad that's coming. Pity, because I'm partial to that name. Elijah, is my very favorite Mikaelson.

After re-reading this myself I wondered that too. I didn't remember this bit about Elijah from my first reading. But it's a definite possibility.

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I didn’t read the 1st installment but did vampires in Jazz’s world used to have babies back in the day? Saying that vampires used to have royalty that was matrilineal certainly implies so. It also is implied by Anakatrine being three when her mother was killed. When did vampires lose that ability? And while I see the horror of losing immortality, is it the case now (obviousely) that Thereasa can now have children? Is the question that is it worth the loss of immortality to have children? And speaking as a dude, isn’t all the long hair a disadvantage in a fight? And finally, why are all the guys the same and the women so different? There is a lot of variety with the women, but the men are pretty similar except for the hybrids. But they are magical beings and there differences lie in in the magic they display.