by lovecraft68
Fantastic story. Third time of reading and still grabs my attention. I think the fact that the intimate passages could be made PG with no detriment to the tale being told makes it shine.
l may, however, need to send you my dentist bill, he gets annoyed when I have too much sweet. l really do mean that as a compliment. Thanks for a feel good story.
Second time good as the first. Advantage of starting to lose shot term memory!
Oh, WoW!! That was just amazing I loved how Sam pursued Justin, she didn’t play games, she put herself right there for him to be in love with her or she could accept the fact that he wasn’t . I’m not sure I could chase a guy, my best friend, like that make love with him and accept that he didn’t love me back. I think Sam knew, she sensed Justin was just as much in love with her as she was for him, we girls kind of just know those things before our guys do. Maybe that’s why nine out of ten times we tell our men that we love them, before he either says it first or realizes he does love her back.
It was me who said “I Love You” first with my own best friend, now my husband almost thirty years ago, I already knew deep in my heart that he felt the same. We have been best friends since the first day of preschool, a whole lot of firsts together side by side as well as some firsts we couldn’t do side by side! What better way to begin a long lasting, life long love affair than to start it with your best friend. He had one girlfriend before me they never even made it past first base. I had never even been on a real date before him, not because I’m lacking in the looks department, (I’ve been told that I’m pretty by my best friend and both guys and gals). It’s just that everyone pretty much thought we were already a couple all through high school probably because we were always together anyway. I’m so glad my best friend and I took a chance and got together as a couple, we would have probably wondered “what if…” if we hadn’t.
I love love loved this story, it was very easy to read, easy to imagine, 5 STARS!!!
A shopworn plot, but well done. l'm not sure how two people can be so close for so long and not realize how they feel about each other, but these kids managed it. I liked the two MC's and felt good about their success in becoming intimate. You never know where this will go for the two of them, but it certainly sounds promising. 4*
I thought it was hot and well written, but Sam should have let Justin have sex with someone else. It’s not like it was her first time. Yikes.
A good debut effort, but you wrote him as such a clueless dork that it actually put me off. The end result was predictable, but he was best summed up by her comment about taking one step forward and two steps back. I actually enjoy good character development, but he was too much of a weenie to care about.
I generally don't comment on any story but, OMG, I love the end... It is just tooo perfect to not read again... I am making this a favorite... Thank you...
Absolutely five stars!! I'd give it more if I could. Justin was a damn fool and Sammi just about had to brain him to get him to really look at her like she wanted to be looked at. It was really sweet. And Justin's dick would probably have fallen off from some nasty disease if he'd fucked that slut Jen. Way mo better
Thanks for the great read.
You said at the start that it took you awhile to get going.
I almost left you back at the end of page three but I am glad that I did not.
I've read this a couple times now but it's been a while. Reading so many other stories that ran the same story line, I had forgotten that in the end, Sam was not virgin and had sex with previous boyfriends. Other stories had her character egging on the Justin in order to convince him she was the one he needed. I still love this one regardless. Excellent writing style.
As an aside due to Sam coming to Justin in high heels(maybe I should jump to TT or Twitter with this), I am personally disgusted with the whole 'high heels are sexy' bs. To me, a gal that wears flats or sandals are beautiful. A gal that crams her feet into pointy, too small high heels because they and society thinks it makes them look good are incredibly stupid and short sighted. I used to have the privilege to polish my grams shoes every weekend. One time I asked her why they looked so weirdly bumpy. My grandmother brought home the truth of it. She was a teacher that was REQUIRED to wear heels her whole career. In the end she could barely walk with her messed up feet. The hammer toes and bunions were enough to make you puke. Ever since I've been a foot and toe 'perve'. A recent news article that 2 actresses were almost banned from a red carpet event because they wanted to be comfortable without heels should say it all.
I very much enjoyed it. So many good starts are ruined with over the top bs. Read one that started so nice awkward guys meet nice beautiful girl only for her to trick him into drinking her piss. Thank you for not ruining the story. Was really hot even though there wasn't sex till the end. Would like for him to notice her more. Loved those parts. Would have loved for him to have said it back! He should at least have said I wanted to fuck so bad I never even realized how good making love could be. Shuts her up lol I'm sorry I didn't say it back you start feeling so good after you said it. I tried bit couldn't do anything but moan. Also... I will always remember the first time I made love to my wife. My mother will be so happy to know you were my first. Something about spending the rest of his life with his best friend. Thx
This is one of my favorite stories I have read! Great job and really kept me reading thru with anticipation.
This is a beautiful love story. Priceless - I'll never forget it. Please write more ... anything.
The pace was slow and enticing. We got to know each of our lovers intimately before any physical action began. Sam was the perfect first time lover for her best friend.
Very good romance story. Yes, it did bring back my first time, I married her, 30 years ago. Keep writing.
Great story. You made me feel for both of the main characters and hoped it would work for them before you showed us that it did which is the sign of a good story. More like this please. BardnotBard.
I think this was a great story with a great ending, but I think there should have been a part where Samantha let Jen know that Justin was hers and wasn't Jens to treat like a fool anymore.
Standing ovation. Over a thousand comments probably says enough, but you managed to capture a beautiful and relatable relationship marvellously. In an incredibly sexy way as well. I aspire to be able to transmit something as beautiful in my own writing someday.
Very sweet friendship-turned-relationship. He felt very much like a frustrated teen trying to get laid and she seemed like an actual person as well.
I very rarely give a story five stars but this one deserves it. Excellent work.
Hey .. i am a guy but you had tears in my eyes when she told him she loved him ....i noticed he did not say it back , i could understand how bad he would feel telling her they could only be friends , and that the silly girl should have kept quiet to see how it panned out first but if it was to be just friends how devastated she would be .
but then in the end you gave me tears again Lovecraft when he realised he loved it and wanted it to be more than friends . you really got to me man... i lovef it // Thank You
Wonderful story!! Stirring! I love your writing and the way you express passion.
Beautiful, that's all that's needed to be said. He should have told her how he felt and thought about her while they was in the park. And then she probably would have retorted in the same. I am a Black man, and I loved this work of Love. Never had those type of romance. I don't know about other men out there. This man is a sucker for a storybook romantic relationship. Getting lonely here in Shreveport, and I don't want to fuck, I want To Make Love.....
Great story. It only missing one thing. A morning after having sam telling Jen she failed and how she finally claimed her man.
I've read this story a couple of times. It's hot, sexy, and sweet. I love the way Sam takes over the situation. And you might not have known it, but there are clues all the way through the story.
Five. Gold stars.Some very nice writing. Need more of these stories. Keep up the good work.
Not bad, needs a part 2 of him and Sammi dealing with jen and furthering their relationship. Coming out to their friends and family as well. This is a great beginning!
A beautifully sweet story of two close friends finally realising the truth about their feelings.
I'm past my prime now; hell, I'm bordering on old age. But in all that time I never met a girl that actually enjoyed giving head. Of those that would do me the favor? honor? none ever let me come in their mouth, even as I seemingly brought them to two or three orgasms. I know cum-in-mouth blowjobs are a staple of erotic literature and poro movies but I can't help but feel that it's only imagination or paid service where it happens in real life.
Oh well, I guess this story just makes me feel sorry for myself; an emotion I am loathe to entertain.
Good story, well written.
LOVELY ! You write so wonderfully. Excellent characterization. Please keep up your most excellent work.
What a GREAT story! Really funny at times. Warm loving, romantic and so sexual. You checked all the boxes. Well done !!
I really enjoyed this story more than any I've read in the last four years when I started reading them .it really carried a strong point on how we all can miss out on what could really be meant to be between relationships.people and friends . Awesome Story
Another very enjoyable read. Thank you Lovecraft68 for the hard work you put for our enjoyment
Great story and well written. Kept your attention and told an important point on how we miss what is in front of us. i really enjoyed reading this and made me realize what is important in friendship and relationships
You should have added a epilogue where they are getting married and she finds out she pregnant and maybe years down the road that kid or there grandkid asks how they met and you just end it by saying that what friends are for
It was quite a good story but it missed a few bits. 1. Men only cum on the faces of women they think are worthless whores 2. And perhaps more importantly, the story should have continued to where he tells his now ex girlfriend to fk off
This story was absolutely incredible. I'm sure you're not shocked to know that there are so many stories that I have skipped to "the good parts", but this was not one of them. I devoured every letter and loved every sentence. So good, so erotic, so satisfying. I totally NEED to read more from you now. Thank you so much for giving me this to want to read over and over again. So good.
Man, I gotta tell you, this story was phenomenal. Everything about it. It kept me interested the whole time. I usually prefer one-off stories but I would love to read more about Justin and Sammi. 10/10
I loved the relationship development. This story wasn't some meaningless porno (that could have been a scene with Jen getting cum on her face), it was a budding romance. It would have been as emotionally satisfying without any sexy details. And it's so true, you know how much that person means to you in the after-cuddle. PS: Always trust your friends' judgement on your new lover!
A bit slow at the start, but that was as promised. The end was certainly worth waiting for... and not what I was expecting.
Thank you for writing such a lovely story, keep up the good work, but get him into her arse and start fucking it hard and ry real soon...
Love your style.
Love the slow build-up.
Love the details.
Love how they are believable.
Keep up the great work!
This was an amazing read I thoroughly enjoyed it I’d like to see a second chapter with the slut getting dumped and the mom commenting on its about time with mutual friends being surprised and supportive
an absolutely superb story!
going to read all you write
thank you for the opportunity!!!
Just read this again for umteenth time and still love it. Great characters good story. Nice work! Thanks for sharing your work with is
I don't normally comment on stories I read, ( and I know I should not do that) but I have to say this story was exceptional. You made a comment about starting slow and making it a journey, and that's what you did. Great job, great story, perfect structure, perfect pace wanted more. Thank you.
An astonishing feel-good story. A delightful contribution to the "First Time" category. I am truly astonished and delighted.
I really really enjoyed this, so captivating enthralling Im new to this site Ive popped in maybe 6 times over maybe 4 months I was rocked by the first story I read the others varied on their effect on me I usually enjoy savouring the back story more than the sex 'act' description But the love making in this story took me in I cried a lot Im still emotional jelly
thank you so much
cant express my feelings n thoughts adequately
quivering like a leaf
I loved this story. I could tell from the beginning that Sammi had feelings for Justin. As close as they were.
So glad you made it a happy ending.
Wonderfully written story.
I loved this story, it hit home in so many points such as always chasing sluts… cheating sluts at that and never noticing that special sexy friend that’s right beside you. I only wish I’d had my friend have the balls to do what Samantha done and console me they way she did. I didn’t even know she liked me until years later when all my friends told me she had the hots for me and I was dumb to see it. By then she had moved away and it was too late. She was absolutely beautiful and I always wanted to be her boyfriend but didn’t think I stood a chance and all it would have taken would have been to ask.
I've been reading stories on this site for at least 10 years and this one has been the best one by far! Thank you!
When you love someone and do not even know it. A beautiful story. She is worth it.
That's so nice! I loved the connection between Justin and Sammi, and it's a rare thing to encounter great stories like this. Thanks Lovecraft68 for making this.
Outstanding!!!!!!! I love this story. The build up was everything you said it would be. You are a great writer. I definitely would love to read more of your stories.
Great story and wonderful writing!! Fantastic development of characters and nice story arc! Keep writing!
My first time writing about a story. I gave you a five and that’s a first for me also. Great story, nice pace as you moved through the story. Good luck with your writing and I wish you much success. I was watching a talk show a couple of years ago and they were interviewing 5 famous or well known female author's and they all started out writing erotica so they could get published. Irv.
Great story! I don't know how I missed it or you all these years. This one gets a very rare Favorite an you get added to my follow list so I don't miss any new offerings as I cruise through your existing library!
1,091 comments? Well 1,092 now! Unheard of!
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I straight up hate Sam. As a character I hate her soo much, imo she's dumb as fuck. Her character is a huge drag and made me abandon the story.
Loved it. Would’ve given you a 6. Great buildup, romantic, very sexy, had me thinking I was Justin by the time they feel asleep together. Thanks.
Great story. I loved it, but I'm curious to know why you didn't end the story with a scene when his ex comes over or how Sam takes her apart later that morning. I've read too many stories that just end without tying up the loose ends. I still really enjoyed it.
There are happy tears on my face as I write this. What a beautiful story of first love. Your writing made me feel a part of the tale. I was Justin and Sammi was a long ago girl who made me realize that friendship was a great prelude to love. She also was a tomboy and we played cowboys together and then suddenly she was a girl and I fell in love. Happy memories. Thank you for the characters and the buildup to a great romance. I've loved many of you other stories, but this one merits "favorite".
This story is so beautiful, it deserves 100 stars! Nice build up wonderful ending.
LeB