All Comments on 'The Accident'

That story was one of the best . Rarely does it happen that the stories are not just about sex.Keep it up

Just like the original Poseidon Adventure. You are truly a gifted writer. Your characters come to life, and the reader starts to identify with and root for the main characters.

thank you for this story.

I don't know who you are or what you do... but fuck, you're A FUCKING MAGICIAN

Keep it going... it makes literotica feel like it's worth more than just the 'erotica'

Hi

I was really enjoying this story, then it just ended! I'm glad I looked online at the main site though.

I read Literotica on the Android app and the last two pages are missing in that version.

If that had been the ending (just after the attack) I'd wonder if I wanted to read anymore of your stories. Technical glitch i know but worth seeing if they can fix it.

The best story I read so far. The structure that the story had was perfect and also no cheese characters or scenes. Just a perfect story.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

she is a walking disaster.....god help them when the baby arrives...quite funny in parts...

Wonderful story, writing!

Your stories are so touching. The sweetness of this story is like a balm over my sore heart that was caused by the Rehab. What can I say but that I'm a sucker for happily ever afters. Beautifully written. Keep up the good work.

I just want you to write a book and then make a movie and then a show, and don't let the damn thing die until i do. I love your stories. They're so relatable in the best ways possible. You have got talent beyond most writers. Thank you so much for giving us your time and imagination.

Yours stories are my favorites in Romance section. I have read 3 of yours stories, and you are my favorite author now.

Great story with happy end. Lovely story, well written and expressed.

I liked very munch, really.

Keep yours stories in the same way ever!

Congratulations!

5* for you!

That was great

I haven't l laughed so hard in a long time. I think I married her sister...

This story was a good read, and had very few typos, very few grammar errors.

Live long and prosper.

This is ten stars for sure. Such a beautiful story to read on this rainy day. You really made my day.

I've read about a dozen stories on your page but this one is easily my favorite so far. Rebecca is so endearing it hurts and the rest of the story was fairy tale like without going overboard. Absolutely loved it

Great story! Lovin' your work!!

The second time was better than the first.

But, please, please please keep doing it! I have thoroughly enjoyed every one of your stories that I have read and hope you have many more to share with your readers. Thanks.

You have a magical way with words. I truly enjoy reading each and every story you have here.

I have, in the past commented as anonymous. Not anymore. Because of your works, I have joined Literotica so that I can list you as one of my favorite authors.

Great story!

Very well done!

Yes I saw her parentage but damn well done anyway!

Your stories are worth selling.

You couldn't write a bad story if you tried.

Another fun and funny read. Thoroughly enjoyed it

The annotation on the 5 stars are wrong in my book, as love is something you feel towards your wife/spouse/kids etcetera - not towards a thing/concept/story. However I'm getting around that by issuing 6 stars, meaning that this is a story I might re-read with delight at a later time :-)

Five star rating is not justified. There should be seven star option too...

Again a story without a peer.

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

It's a great story! Thank You!

A Damned good story, well-told.

The twist was very useful, but I think it might have been worth a paragraph to hear her loss of 'nerves'.

Thank You

HP

How on earth have I not stumbled on your writings before? Another delightful story. Thank you for sharing it.

You did a great job of character development, especially on your protagonists.

VisualPerv

Absolutely fabulous! I loved it.....Enough Said!

You have a knack for writing absolutely wonderful stories. The plot twist in this one just made it better. You are my preferred writer on this site, and always look for your new stuff. Keep it up.

This had such a great story to it! I've read far too many books not to guess about her mother, but the Toni part totally threw me! Great story, and great plot!!!!! WONDERFUL!

What a great story.

I agree with the previous comment that you should be writing professionally.

More please!

Good twist with mummy tammi

Thought Tony might have stumped up cash for becs restaurant

Loved it funny crazy sad it has it all. Thank You!

Moog_Player is my favorite romantic author on this site, but your stories give him some serious competition. Thanks for your work. I'll keep reading!

I have read this more than once and it gets better each time!

Expanded would make a great book, heck a great romantic movie.

You are talented.

Your work is nothing short of spectacular: thank you for allowing my temporary escape from reality.

A nice story.

You seem to handle dialogue and situations very well.

Thank You

HP

sometime your twisted sense of humor works ... Scotty

So well written, so humorous. I was actually laughing out loud at some of the situations, narrative and dialogue. Wonderful story, thanks.

Absolutely AMAZING Story!!!!! 5 stars is NOT ENOUGH!!!!!

...you CAN'T keep getting better with every story! This can't be possible!

Enthralled from beggining to end

It could be just that. A remarkable achievement of drama, suspense and above all, love. 10++q

Now that was a Hell of a Romance. Well done indeed.

Thank You Very Much.

Morgan DeWolfe

Just a wonderful story. So sweet, and with your usual twist.

Love this story! Made me smile all afternoon.

Touching, humorous, and steamy, well-written besides. A+ effort.

Captivating. Surprising. Gently funny. Sweet romance with a male's self-deprecating view of both himself and the twists and turns of life. Mufasa's inadvertent poisoning was a great moment as was the unneeded implications of their future with an interesting family connection. Thank you for writing!

My housework is lacking.....I can't stop reading! :D

I didn't mean to, but I liked it again.

oh well

accidents happen

Hi,

You have done it once again . . . that is write another fantastic story. You have churned out one great story after another. I suggest that you go for a bigger story - more of a novel - that you should consider publishing.

'Hats off', to your talent and your passion for writing.

Please keep it up!

Cheers,

Gopi

A very entertaining story and a great read. It's a very rare opportunity to read a story where the writing just disappears and the story completely envelopes the reader. The main character was believable and Rebecca was that mix of scary and intriguing. You avoided the pitfalls of this genre and left the happier ever after to our imagination. If had a complaint it would be a nit pick and I would have to think a while to come up with something. Thank you for an enjoyable morning.

why oh why does great wisdom and deep love only come after unbearable pain and suffering?

why oh why does the body mind and soul have to be torn to shreds only to be

rebuilt to perfection only if deemed lucky?

why oh why, do such stories make the heart overflow with hope, while tears of redemption stream down the face?

as a child i once wished that i never wanted to be happy, as i realised that only sadness follows happiness,

now i realize that only in sadness pain & suffeing can true body mind and soul uplifting happiness blossom in ones heart,

All it needs is a Rebecca Morrison, to plant seed of hope & redemption!

thanks for the wonderful story, if its any consolation the story was perfect as perfect can be!

Another brilliant tale man....keep it up..B-)

A remarkably similar experience to that highlighted by ‘rohit7785’. I read the story via the Android App and found that the story ended suddenly as Damon is beaten up.

I was shocked that such a good story would end so suddenly and at such a crucial juncture.

I switched to the website to search for an ending to the story or to leave feedback requesting the same.

I was greatly relieved to discover that the website version didn’t end abruptly but continued to its proper conclusion.

The premature ending on the app left me feeling a need for closure for the story; I believe that this is a testament to the quality of the writing and the author who has created believable characters with which the reader can identify.

I truly loved the story, thank you for sharing.

....is always my excuse as to why I am so clumsy and accident-prone.

DC, yet another masterpiece of writing. You never disappoint when it comes to your characters or dialogue or development of their relationships.

Furthermore, I am impressed that you skillfully faked me out. Until the final denouement with Tammi and Toni, I had been figuring that Cathy was Rebecca's mother. Great plot twist!

U know... I was reading this story on the app and it somehow ended on the part where Damon got beaten up and those half words. I was shocked that how can such a good story stop there... I came to the site to leave a comment and a feedback that the story was great until u left it in between and was soo happy to have found the rest of it.

Loved the story :)

thanks for sharing

Perfect. Heart-stoppingly perfect. Words can't even begin to cover just how... Ugh. I give up. You are amazingly good! Are you sure you're not a published author? You should be. You deserve more than some of the most well-known writers. Here's to a lot more! *cheers idol!!*

Lovelots, HunterChic1807 xoxo

I'm not quite sure how I feel about this story. I very much liked the first half. It had good character development and heartfelt emotion, but then the beating scene happened and I felt like I was reading a completely different story. I even asked myself out load, "When did this become a mob tale?". For me, it was just one hell of a left turn that didn't seem to connect at all to what was happening in the first part.

For another Great Story. The variety you've managed in your library is incredible. Every one has been five stars; I am truly looking forward to the next one.

I couldn't put it down. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

I have to be honest I didn't like it much.

I am also comparing this to The Promise. Loved IT!!!

Hey just coming from me you're a great writer. If anyone else does not like my comments or criticism they can kiss my ass!

This is the third story of your I've read and as usual, another 5 star effort. The previous comments your readers left says it all...

I love a good challenge. I have not yet deleted "The Accident" from my word processor. I found one use of "sensible" and one use of "sensibility." I believe we used both correctly, but I can see how a reader could be confused by viewing sensibility in a slightly different context.

Here it is: “Ask me tomorrow,” Rebecca responded, smiling, “when I have clothes on.” I chuckled at her sensibility.

If he was describing HIS chuckle, we've used the wrong word. But he is describing HER sensible response, so I believe we used the correct word.

Of course I loved it, as I stated in an earlier comment. On rereading the story I noticed you used sensibility when I think you meant sensibly. Sensibility has to do with emotions, not common sense. This is just an FYI for the future.

Love all your stuff and look forward to your next story. :)

Dreamcloud you are a genius, thank you so much

Truly a great story. Humor, sex and a touch of violence. Thanks for sharing......

What a delightful story! I really enjoyed reading it and plan to read it again in a few months.

Thanks a lot! I read this one and also Rehab! Both are great! I couldn't stop reading till the end. They have this good quality about them, a calming effect on the mind and soul. Again, thank you!

I first read this on the Lit mobile app and the story stopped just after the lionfish stung him. I was devastated and came on the full site just to send you a note BEGGING you to finish it, but here, I found it finished. Wonderfully so! I think, at this point, I've read all of your stories and each one has been better than the last.

Heart warming with a hint of excitement. Loved the story and the characters. You could have easily squeezed in a few more pages to expand the plot, but its also pretty damn good to leave the rest to imagination. Im looking forward to reading the rest of your works.

some people try as they may seem to make messes. nice tale. there is a cable

they use to control a spring when it brakes. all springs brake sooner or later.

I guess he did not have the safety cable liked your tale.

As long as they replace everything breakable in the house with things that bounce off floors. He should also not stand too close to her while she's handling sharp things, and make sure there's a fire extinguisher in every room of the house.

some troubled, some confused, some just plain evil, and a couple of pleasant, but insecure good people.

thanks for a good story

I've enjoyed reading your Romance stories. Well written and kept my interest until the end! Bravo!

Damon's occupation brought back some vivid memories of my own career at IBM.

Well done!

Burninglove

I'm romantic as the next guy (maybe more), but I have limits. Rebecca might be gorgeous, a great cook, amazing in bed... but all that baggage! Sorry, but NO woman is worth getting whacked by the syndicate, I don't care how hot she is. Damon should have let her stew in jail while he ran the other way and counted his blessings (remember, she tried to blackmail him at first!). I can only imagine the non-stop train wreck that household would be. Maybe not her fault, but you can't have a great marriage with great sex if you're dead. I guess that's why it's called fiction...

You've made me late four work! 5 *

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Very easily worth 5 stars. Thank you for sharing it with us.

It's after midnight and I'm too old for this shit. Once started, I couldn't keep from reading the whole freakin' thing. I don't read too many "romance" stories, but this one is the best. Really enjoyed it. ZZzzzz Oops! Sorry about that. Good plot, good writing, good story. Cheers!

I've only been around here for a short while but I find your stories to be my favorites. You are a softy. I'm not sure I can imagine you writing a truly full on crime thriller as I think you tend to see the good in people. Old age will do that to some of us. Know that I'm looking forward to more of your stories. Well done.

Hi, I'm Wieliczka (forgot to sign in). Great story. My only selfish comment is that could you break it into smaller chucks next time? (10 pages) Makes it easier to digest. Other than that, I appreciate the time and effort it takes. I understand how you can have a germ of an idea, and the characters in your head, and it has a life of its own from that point on. Great work.

Just found you on literotica as an author and can not wait to read your other stories. 5*'s

Re: possible lack of proper depth perception.

Missed that - I don't have a plan when I write. Just some small portion of a plot. The story takes on a life of its own once it hits the page. Wish I would have thought of the depth perception. It would have melded well and added to the conclusion. This actually started as a full fledged - no holes barred - crime thriller. It changed when Rebecca mouthed "I'm sorry" at the accident. Suddenly I liked her. She went from a crime lord's bitch of wife to someone to love. Yeah - I'm a sucker.

I have two more stories started. 'The Hacker' will be finished first, then 'The Cotillion.' Yeah - I have no life.

Great story! Put a smile on my face.

Very good story! I first read this on Lit app android. The story ended on page 200, just as Damon was groggy hearing a few words in the hospital. (somewhere on page 8 on this website). I kept looking for you to post the rest of the story... then found the rest of it here. I've sent app comments to the website, but have never heard back.

I very much enjoyed this well written tale of two lovers. One question that puzzles me, however, is why no one who cares about Rebecca has ever had her evaluated by specialists. The accidents, such as hitting his stopped vehicle, dropping the chicken or hitting the super market display with the shopping cart appeared to involve some possible lack of proper depth perception or maybe some neurological disturbance. If I was Damon, I would have her evaluated, especially before the baby is born.

Nicely done, a very endearing story. I wonder if she cleaned the urine off those pregnancy tests before putting them on the kitchen counter. Thank you I enjoyed it immensely.

This was a very good very well written story. Very enjoyable!

Congrats on a job well done.

Of course as I've come to expect nothing less

ss1969

Thanks for sharing a great story.

The way u described the characters their ways and everything

this is the first story of yours i have read. I enjoyed every chapter, every word and iam really impressed with your style of writing. keep wrighting

I've really enjoyed every one of your stories, this included. However, I had trouble finishing this one.

While I understood her convoluted reasoning on some level, Rebecca leaving Damon when he needed her the most didn't sit right with me at all. I didn't like her character as much after that. I'm not sure how you could have handled it much differently in this story - perhaps having her nurse him back to health, make sure he's okay, and THEN leave?

It struck me like she'd failed a version of Sonny's car test in A Bronx Tale. Maybe it's just me.

I loved it up until then, and the discovery of her history was still very interesting afterwards. Thanks for all of the great stories.

Cog

What a wonderful story. Please ignore the comment about long winded and making him clumsy too. The writer of that comment has no sense of humor or romance. I agree with the comment that if you're not writing for a living you should be. I couldn't stop reading until I reached the end. If you begin writing novels I see sleepless nights in my future. Please write more!

Long winded, and making him clumsy too, just didn't add to the storyline IMO.

Normally don't read 1st person accounts. But I loved this.