by DreamCloud
The fates were not to be denied. You made them real, and you made us care. 5 stars!
Love - as both a concept, a feeling, and a practice.
I laughed out loud at your wedding scene, enjoying that part so much I re-read it 3 more times.
I have ever 'favorite'd (is that a proper expression now?).
This story was about as close to perfect as imaginable. If you don't already write for a living, you may want to reconsider whether you may be missing your true calling. ...anf I do not say that lightly as I aspire to write some more myself. It seems that you already write far better than I am ever likely to.
I'm more than a tinge jealous, but will probably have to mollify my feelings of comparative inadequacy by enjoying your past and future offerings. I tip my hat to, sir.
Dream Cloud you turn out fine stories full of twists and turns. Thanks for the entertainment.
Damn it all, Dreamcloud, you've done it again. I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed this story. Thank you for writing such an enjoyable and entertaining tale.
Thank you. Don't comment much, but your writing is extraordinary. I was just reading a published mystery book, and your work is better than that.
I am really thrilled that you submit here. Once again, if you decide to publish for money, please let us know so I can support you financially.
thoroughly enjoyed this one .. you have a new fan !! .. keep it up!!!
Truly unusual and refreshing storyline Most enjoyable I've read in a while.
Thanks for your efforts and skill.
Thank you for taking your time to write it. I've tried to write a few myself and know how much time it takes to write a good story. I completely enjoyed it. Looking forward to your next one.
I have become a fan and look forward to reading more of your stories!
Very enjoyable story. I enjoy a story that comes together despite the trauma that Damon and Rebecca to the great ending for both. They will be protected for life even though from a less that sterling source.
Once again you write a story that I can totally immerse in. It would never have fit in the flow, but I do wonder what he told Trudy.
I have been going through withdrawal. A nice romantic read. I would, however, have appreciated an update on the fish tank🎣
Well written. Brought a tear(or 2) to my eyes. Written like a Danielle Steele novel. Very nice. Keep up the GREAT work. :-)
Picked it up and just couldn’t put it down. Perfect in every sense. A damn good read and thank you for posting it.
What a wonderful way to spend a rainy Sunday morning. Perfect all the way. 5+ from me.