The Assignment Ch. 05

The end is truly some overflowing romance ....... Are you sure those guys have been bad dangerous vampires? ...... You really sure you can turn bad boys into soft sweet ones? ...... So you must be a magican or a witch ....... Smile

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I thought it was just great. Wishing you would finish the series. I have read everything you written with the exception of the first story that although it is mentioned on the litrotica website l can't seem to access it.

Loved this!!!!!

This is like the 12th time I've read this story and I always follow through with the rest, sometimes reading them over and over, and the whole series is absolutely amazing!

Literally does not mean "very." It means you aren't exaggerating; what you wrote was factuaI. Unless Mara was wearing socks with her LBD, you're using the word incorrectly, and half a dozen times in less than two pages would be annoying in any case. You are truly a wonderful storyteller and a talented writer. The lack of attention paid to grammar and spelling in this story and your book do you a disservice. If I'd started with one of these, I would have quit before I had the chance to QUITE LITERALLY adore your later works. Also, both main characters use the phrase "for so long" when declaring their love, but I only saw time periods adding up to less than a month... not so long. Please do your fans and potential readers the favor of fixing these two stories so we can whole-heartedly recommend ALL your work to others!

I am sorry. I meant it to be 5 stars but my touchscreen is touchy and I hit 3 instead.

This was too sweet for my taste I guess.

I didnt like the fact that you had 2 strong ancient vampires

and turned them into 2 helplessly romantic marshmallows.

In other words the transformation, I believe weakened you male characters

and made your story too... "pink"

At first I was refreshed by Dimitris story, there was something dark and dangerous about him, he was a predator. And then he falls asleep and wakes up a kitten after 2000 years of living??? come oooon... And the use of full names for the purpose of intensifying love expression.... "I love you my Dimitri Bozic" This was all unnecessarly too much!!!

Up until this point I 've been giving your chapters (FTI and The Assig.) 4-5 stars, but this chapter gets only 1 because it ruined my hopes for a worthy ending.

The Millie Jared storyline was ok, so if there is a sequel to that I will read it and hopefully it wont have turned pink as well.

Never the less thank you for your time and creativity writing this, no matter if I liked it(that much) or not, it was an overall enjoyable experience so far!!!

It is always nice to read about how the other vampire couples met stories...lively and entertaining....would have actually like to have something happen at the club where one possessive woman would come up to splash Mara's face with cocktail or something out of jealousy...haha

Also like a series of how he met Caleb and their adventures/misadventures...

Sounds a bit like twilight! Lol keep reading the rest of the series! It gets better and better. All characters continue to crop up. I'm checking everyday for ch 9 of Tears..

This series was amazing!! I loved it! But you should do an epilogue. Like of them after getting married and her deciding to change on their wedding night. Add a twist like her being pregnant (if it's possible after the change since he's come in her before she changed). I don't know. I just don't want this to end!!!!