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Click hereJust wanting it over, Pretty's head bobbed as she did his bidding. Having had no previous experience with men, she had little warning when Jacob thrust in deeply and uttered an anguished cry. His body shook in spasm as her mouth filled with his ejaculate. Again, his thumb pressed her windpipe and he admonished her not to swallow yet. Standing back he made her show Frank the contents of her plundered mouth. When at last he allowed her to swallow she wept. The taste of him lingered long after and Pretty would not soon forget her humiliation.
In the granary Sarah waited until the light went out in the breeding shed before she gathered up her daughters and walked silently back to the house. Two hundred feet away, Pretty squatted barefoot in the cool dark waters of the creek. She splashed water on her thighs and abdomen trying to cleanse herself for the house. She scooped water into her palm and rinsed out her mouth. Then she let her cool, wet fingers ease the ache in her nipples where they had been cruelly pinched. Her ordeal over, she now had a new fright twisting through her thoughts. Jacob Coulter and Mr. Frank said Mr. Caleb would "wup her" and "maybe sell her" if he found out what she'd done. She was all too aware that the price of their silence would be more of the same. She had no way to know that the twins were already up at the house, tremulous and giddy with excitement, dying to tell anyone who'd listen.
Sarah, concerned that Caleb would find out all she had witnessed after he'd left without calling out to him to intervene, had cautioned her daughters not to speak of it. She herself was up in her room trembling with a deep carnal excitement over what they had witnessed. She enjoyed the helplessness and humiliation that Pretty had felt first with Toulaine and then at Jacob Coulter's hands. Watching her come in the midst of all her whining and tears was especially delightful. Hopefully Caleb would now realize she was right. This day had been long over due.
- COMMENTS
SteamyCream4 months agoJust re-read this story having originally read it 10 years ago (time flies). Still love it and hope you write similar stories. Breeding is exciting....I would have loved it if the breeder bred her more than once that evening. Still a very hot story even though I am now 10 years older than when I first read it :) Hot.
mcrr222511 months agoThis story needs more. Maybe the wife and daughters can sneak out and get some practice from the black bulls.
Clarissa72almost 2 years agoPlus…..I have no problem with the “N” word. It is an accurate use of the word in the context of a period piece. As my comment before stated, it’s not words that bothered me but the realism. You did a good job, because at “the end of the day” this is suppose to be erotic fiction. I hope you don’t stop writing or posting. You are extremely good at it. Otherwise, your story wouldn’t have touched/made me feel anything at all. I hope my earlier comment is not interpreted as negative because that is not my intent. Have a great weekend and continue in your storytelling. 🌹peace and blessings…from a “World Away”!
Clarissa72almost 2 years agoTo Author NOT Readers,
I’m sorry but this story had my chest tight and stomach knotted (not in a good way but more from anxiousness). I know the writing was well done but the plot, the down right evilness and pure sickness of morality (of the white women, neighbors, overseer, and other slave) was a lot to take. I know that it’s fiction, but we or most of us know how this story is a close representation of what happened to The American Slave, especially the young girls and women. (I skipped this story to many times to count but decided to read it this time. It’s like I was almost fearful of reading it).😏
So, even with that knowledge or rather feeling; I know that it is a well written story. However, I just couldn’t take this storyline. I thought I could but I can’t. So sorry!
5* for the actual writing, realism and editing. Yet, I can’t vote on this one, because of the realism and closeness to historical accuracy. However, I wanted you to know that your writing and editing is extremely good.
The American Slaves, were brutalized and killed for no reason good enough to explain away the lack of humanity. It’s not to say, slaves from other territories were not; I just studied that region. As well, I know these stories and this site is not about morality or even humanity; but this story struck a cord In me personally. So, I’m not leaving a bad comment, as much as I’m saying this was a hard story for me. Ultimately, it’s just not for me, but others hopefully enjoyed it.
Thank you for your time and how well this story was written. I hope you have continued success in your storytelling. As well as great support from readers who can separate fact from fiction. 🌹
ContinentalPsyOpalmost 3 years agofinely crafted piece of writing, building to the final sentence, the very cherry atop a delicious cake. all the different perspectives, the period details, the pacing--very professional. very intense, real, and fun. thank you for this.
SteamyAsiaabout 11 years agoVery good story - I thought that the breeding would have been more exciting as a 'breeding party' of the slave owner and his white friends (sperm competition) to breed her. Please write more!
LeslieMcBrideabout 11 years agoThe story has authenticity because it does not try to be politically correct. Using the word nigger in the context of historical accuracy shows no disrespect for blacks. To sugar coat their history would be a lie. Please keep writing stories like this that have some substance. The sex is so much hotter because of your attention to detail and your knowledge of the subject. Thank you for your stories. I do hope you post more!
Anonymousover 11 years agoExellent narration, good plot. However on the topic of not using the word 'nigger' (writergirl24) whatever 'words' you use, it can always be termed racist. Back in India calling some black (ofcourse in Indian slang) is never offensive to anyone. It is the mindset of the blacks that needs to improve. Plus all 'white' americans should also not call them 'americans'. If blacks are called 'African Americans' should technically white people be called 'European Americans'??
However thats a different subject altogether.. Really wonderful storytelling by urban_legend555. I doff me hat to thee.
blackirishladover 11 years agojust how sickeningly politically correct has our society become? there are stories here, that raise no ire, about cuckolded abused men, white men and women submitting to black men, men and women being humiliated in all kinds of situations, and don't forget tales of incest. I'm new to this site, known about it awhile but have recently been frequenting it more, one thing I've definitely noticed is how prevalent cuckolding is specifically. I don't see how you can be so touchy or picky about content when so much here is flagrantly offensive to common good taste.
I mean really, what adult would truly have a concern about the word nigger when context is completely understood, and more importantly you're considering the source of where it is coming from. Not to mention you're potentially stepping on the fetish and interests of others who may be into such things. You don't want to go down the censorship road when it comes to porn.
The hypocrisy of some people is astounding. would you object over a story where a black man is declaring how physically, sexually, and racially superior he is over a white husband and wife? could you find one comment on this site that objected to that on one of the many such stories here? and could you find ANY stories that reversed the roles?
LUSTYWHEELSover 11 years agoI like the story and can only wish I were able to write so well but I found it very difficult to read due to the language used. I have to agree with writergirl24 that you could have done something a little different.
If it were me I'd edit it using a different word word to replace the one in question, and a sentence or two explanation that your aware in those days the other term was used it has been substituted because we now live in better times. It would make it a much more comfortable read and more people would finish the story to leave better votes that you would deserve. Tthanks
urban_legend555over 11 years agoAuthorHello Writer Girl and thank you for your comment on The Breeding Shed. It certainly is the height of political incorrectness to refer to Black people as niggers in 2012. But the story isn't set in this day and age. It's the antebellum south and the idiom of the day was not euphemistic in any way. I think taking a young girl into a barn and tying her down to breed her while white folks sat around and enjoyed it as entertainment is not exactly Uncle Remus. But it is consistent with a time in history when blacks were bred for profit. When the US government banned the importation of slaves in 1807, it created a niche for breeders to fill the need for cheap labour. They did not refer to their breeding stock as darkies, people of colour, African Americans or any of the progressively more politically correct names that have evolved through the past 150 years to replace what is now considered the deprecating, insulting and perjorative term nigger in our lexicon. I have no problem with the change. Both society and language should evolve. I just don't think you can rewrite history.
writergirl24over 11 years agoI have visited this site for years, but after reading your story I registered just to be able to comment on it. I found the idea to be a very good one, but as a black woman the use of the N word highly offensive. Next time try to be a bit more creative. There are other terms you could have used such as uppity darky, black bitch, etc.
darlene495about 12 years agoThank you for telling the story accurately. The breeding of black female slaves was indeed big business in the south. These young women were both business and ready recreation for the white families who controlled them. I don't deny the eroticism of the story or condemn anyone for getting off on it. I have often fantasised about what it must have been like to be ordered to strip and perform on the whim of anyone white. Or what it would have been like to have an overseer decide it was time for my daughter to lose her virginity. We can all sit in judgment now but it was a different time then. I think you've got it right and have produced a sexy entertaining story that sticks close the the reality that existed then. Even today, a black sister who goes out with a white boy should be aware that he expects her to put out, and everyone who sees them together expects that she will. Keep writing. I would love to read a chapter more of this.
jazzdancerover 12 years agoA wonderfully erotic story with a strong flavor of authenticity. The sex is hot and the characters seem to come from real life as with all of your stories. The fact that it was Caleb's wife who was insisting that the girl be bred brings another dynamic to the story that I really liked. I'm not at all offended by the 'n' word. It's not used gratuitously. I can't imagine the story having credibility without it. I hope you will write more of the Breeding Shed.
